Mask

Life is meaningless,

without love and hate,

without suffer and pain.

You can not live a perfect life,

there will always be a problem,

there will always be fear and death.

You can’t go back to the past,

or look at the future,

so live the present as a gift,

a gift impossible to get.

Remove the mask that covers your face,

remove the negative thought in your head,

be free of negative

that is in your head.

Author's Note

Please give me a good suggestion for the title. The title probably won't stay the same.

Reviews

[Elsie]

I love how you wrote this poem. The title "Mask" is a wonderful title and does not give to much into what the poem is about, but once the reader starts to read they understand so much more. The title is great for it covers the poem so well and what the poem is about. Thank you for sharing.

[Bhumika Devkota]

And thank you for the review, the title was suggested by some great writers.

[Norah]

sums up life perfectly.. excellent write!

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you Norah

[Lizardo]

Ladies and Gentleman, here it is, The poem that should be one of the best because it speaks the truth of our emotions and reality, of our human race.
I love this poem, you are becoming one my favorites writers,
This is really good!

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you so much Lizardo

[Lizardo]

You're welcome

[nelile]

every good. it really got to me, specially with hoe i am feeling now. it was like you were talking to me. but i wish you could have gone deeper.

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you. I as planning to, but I didn't have the time when I was making it.

[anne]

You can’t go back to the past,
or look at the future,
so live the present as a gift,
a gift impossible to get....very true thoughts..:))

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you anne

[Luna Zerimar]

I go with the previous review. "The Mask" does seem fitting. (:

Oh my, be my therapist? Haha. You give out good advice.

Good read dear. I enjoyed very much. x

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you. Actually, being a therapist is in my list of dreams.

[Luna Zerimar]

Go for it! You would make a great one!

[R Smith]

how about The Mask, its a quite brilliant write, perfection is impossible in this world, turn negativity to positive thinking and feel free :)

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you.

[R Smith]

you're welcome and Mask? a great title :)

[Cruz Niq]

Possibly, "Leave you troubles by the wayside"

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you.