Fakers

Fakers

A Story by Ballpark Frank
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All of us have run across fakes. They lie. They aren't real. They hide behind their device. They are not who they say. It's frustrating. They play with our emotions. But, are there real ones?

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I don't like to be played    I don't like fakes


They have dark motives.     They want something


Their presentation is fake      They want your attention


They ask the usual things       they won't answer you


It's about  what THEY want     It's not about YOU        


They deflect            They play with you


You become guarded    You try to be careful.   


They have tendencies      They are predictable  


They're all the same      I know it when it happens now


It's right around the corner.    Then comes the pain The hurt


but, then     


you find one    A REAL one One who can pass your test


One who is genuine      One who cares One who is real 


You don't want to trust    But you see honesty You see good


You fear them    You measure their words


You want to see more   You don't want to push   You fear being hurt.  


Could this be real?  Or is it like the others?


Online scams     Fakers Hiding behind a device


They are tough and confident from miles away  


Courage can come from hiding with a fake name or blocking others


You want to feel   You want to trust You want hope     


Then you see her    She is different She has to be    She has a heart She is unique She is genuine    You don't want to screw up


This needs to work    But can it? Can she be a friend?   Will this last? Will I ruin it? Will she pull away?  


She is beautiful too    But mostly, she is real  


Or, is she?



© 2020 Ballpark Frank


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Ballpark Frank
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A fault of mine that I've never outgrown is that of taking people at their word. Until they give me a reason not to trust them, I believe they are earnest. As you might guess, I've been burned a few times.
And in the realm of romance, I really, really want any possible relation to be much better than they appear. "They'll come around. I can fix those faults of theirs." Yeah, romance is a minefield, eager to blow a man's legs off.
So yes, I can definitely relate. If I was young again and in the market, I'd only hope to think these words you've written. Elvis was right... "only fools rush in". Great and thoughtful writing, Franky.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The world is at your doorstep but will you let them in.
It's a crazy time out there and you're invited to the party.
The sad fact of life now is no one is to be trusted, even the humble policeman is included in this.
If the deal sounds too good to be true, then it probably is. Though if you send me your bank details I will naturally disprove this. lol

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ballpark Frank

5 Years Ago

Thank you Paul for reading and reviewing. I agree with what you are saying about Trust.
This is really interesting. I must say it’s difficult to sometimes spot a fake. That’s what makes it so intriguing. It’s like a ballroom with everyone behind masks.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Ballpark Frank

5 Years Ago

I agree totally with how tricky they are.
Ballpark Frank

5 Years Ago

And thanks for taking the time!
At the beginning it sounds like you're describing a narcissist and I had the impression that this was about a controlling, manipulative partner. What I really like was how the 'they' swaps from the singular to the plural - which is so clever but also really sad. That we're no longer discussing one individual but people in general - which you confirm with ' I know when it happens now' - something people can too often become used to.

So I enjoyed the cyber - twist! An the end note of hope mixed in with doubt.
Laura.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Ballpark Frank

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much! The person I was somewhat describing was indeed fake. Although I didn't yet .. read more
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So true are your words and sadly there’s a lot out there...I don’t have answers but they must feel worthless and not accept themselves in the quest to pretend to be someone else...sadly it affect the innocent and breaks trust...it’s a fake world...sad but there is still good we need to find it...rebuilding trust takes time...but yes I understand and wish I knew y humans do the things they do ...lies bring nothing but bad vibes and ruin one in the end...choices I guess...we live we learn ...life goes on as long as we know we are honest true and real 🌹

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ballpark Frank

5 Years Ago

Thank you for yours thoughts. I appreciate your reading this. I wrote this when I was a little.. read more
This feels like the constant dialogue that is happening inside my head....

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ballpark Frank

5 Years Ago

Trusting is tempting but dangerous isn't it?
universelfkati

5 Years Ago

It's the most dangerous thing you can do. Giving someone the power to hurt you after you have shown .. read more
Ballpark Frank

4 Years Ago

I like this feedback so much. I just read it again and wanted to mention that.
A cycle of endless lies,deciet and patterns of betrayal . My guards so high when I meet a real one will I push them away before they get the chance to fail?


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ballpark Frank

5 Years Ago

Thank you! I appreciate the feedback. There are a ton of fakers here no doubt.
Ballpark Frank

5 Years Ago

I get what you are saying. 💜
Laconic Meraki

5 Years Ago

Yes💜🙌💜💜
I love this. I'm one of the rare ones. I hate liars. And I have a heart of gold. For some reason I can't hurt them the way they hurt me. Even if I wanted to. I'm blessed with a curse and cursed with a blessing.
Nomatter the pain. I remain the same...

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ballpark Frank

2 Years Ago

This is insane that it took 2 years to thank you for your nice comment and review. I appreciate it!.. read more

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