Just A Dream

I see them all staring

I am not sure at what

But it must not be good

Wait, there she is

That's who they've been staring at

She's beautiful

No wonder, she's basically floating

I hope this is a dream

Everything is being flown away

Here she comes

Approaching me

Oh, now there's another side

She doesn't look so good

Her image is disappearing

From her very face

There she goes

Down in the blackness

She doesn't look like she's coming up

Her breath is disappearing

She'll be gone before I meet her

Gone with the demons

The once beautiful now gone

Everybody is forgetting about her

Going back to their everyday lives

But now

I will always have her image in my head

Engraved to never forget

  

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Artwork and words. I like the thoughts and the journey. It is good to be able to open our eyes and enjoy the beauty of life. The poem made me want to read more. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Karmee]

This one is a thinker as well, very nicely presented.

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you :)

[Distant Reality]

Very relatable, Nicely progressed, and was clear.
On the surface its sweet, but when you dive in the water..It's deep.

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thanks for the review :)