Those Three Words

(I finally got around to adding the title) (:

 

I Love You.

The three words I’ve always wanted to hear from you.

Even since we met,

I knew I loved,

But I couldn’t tell you.

You were all the way across the country,

And there was no way I could find you.

But I couldn’t give up.

Day by day,

The feeling grew stronger, as we grew closer.

We went from friends, to best friends,

And then we started to become something more.

I couldn’t believe what had happened.

I hadn’t meant to fall in love,

Late that February night,

But I had,

And I don’t regret it,

Not for one second.

I love you.

Even though we may not last,

I’ll always love you.

I always have,

And I always will.

Author's Note

Finally finished it. I've been trying to write something like this for a while. So, anyways, thanks for reading, and please tell me what you. Oh, and ignore the grammar, and spelling, and stuff like that. Thanks!! :)

Reviews

[the in between]

Nice poem its written so natrually :D great job. seriouslyy. wow
these lines stood out to me:

And I don’t regret it,
Not for one second.
I love you.

[Dingo the Archwizard of..]

Nice. Straight, to the point. Good job.

[Patricia(:]

This is a remarkable poem, true beauty. I love it! Nice choose in in the title (:

[Marlena]

I really like this, it's...just sweet. Sounds unconditional, and that's just awesome. Great work :)

[Emily]

Very nice piece. I know the feeling you have written into this piece and I admire an artist who can convey emotions to her readers. You've done a great job of showing the evolution of the love you feel and wish to feel further from the person you adore.

I think a good title could be "Three Words" or "Evolution of Us"

You have written this quite well. Wonderful work!

[Savvy]

Really good, I loved it. You could call it "Those Three Words", maybe........

[LostInThought ♥]

Great! The classic falling in love story! I am such a sucker for that... ;) It flowed really nice and you did a good job of keeping it fairly short, so it didn't go on and on! :) Great write!

Would you mind reviewing my work?

[deeps]

This is just full of feeling and emotion,
This one tugs. Full of emotion from yoru heart.
Touching I agree!

[Katie]

Touching and lovely. Its nice to be able to tell someone that you love- that you love them. Great job!