LOVE FEAST

sensual

Lips to lips with wind-blown hair

authenticate a swanky pair

side by side preponderance of time

they feast on their love when the old church bells chime

naught a disdain for others

first and foremost, their mothers

 

Birds and bees do love as well

Their passion in nest is where they dwell

Pecks and hums are heard from afar

Bask in a tryst with a falling star

Moonlight beams to all who combine

Wrapped as one in a tempestuous twine

 

Reviews

[Samith Pich]

Lovely, lovely lovely

it is indeed a lovely feast :)

Thanks for sharing

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you so much Samith, appreciate it!!

[Patricia Wedel]

A tryst with a falling Star... wrapped as one in a tempestuous twine... A Perfect Valentine.
tenderly, Pat

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks Pat, you always have poetic review, I love it!!
Fondly, Betty

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing twist of words dear Betty. You allowed the reader to understand the tempestuous twine of love. I enjoyed the complete poem and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks do much, so appreciate it!
Betty

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Betty.

[Just Kim]

Very well written and expressed write. Love the rhythm of this piece.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks Kim, appreciate your comment

[barleygirl]

Excellent effort, combining a distinct rhyme & rollicking rhythm with the spill of bountiful imagery. There's a little bit of a storyline which I'm peripherally aware of as I read, but mostly I'm just chowing down your lively descriptions (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Betty Hermelee]

WOW! Thanks Marge, glad you like it
Hugs. ME xo