My eternal dream

Just read it...

I can't get you out of my mind.

When I close my eyes, it's you

The first one I see,

And your words make me

To tremble, my body heating up

From the messages, you wrote me.

I don't know what's between us,

But I dreamt you kissing me deeply

Your hands entering the trousers

Pulling me towards you by force,

And I moan when our bodies come together.

I know I challenged you

And I'm glad I can hold you

After so long waiting.

We connected through words, lyrics

And you are now my inspiration.

I want to hear you tell me 

That you want to stay with me,

That you want us to find a place where

You can show me what you want

Do with me.

Maybe one day we'll really see each other,

But something tells me I can't wait

Because I found someone

Who sees me as I am

When the night comes

And I change.

I'm difficult and you have to understand me.

I know you want someone to love you,

And I want the same thing.

Maybe we will succeed,

Maybe we will fail.

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

"Just read it..."
Ummm, and what a stimulating read it is … "GULP!"😏

Still, Dear Bianca🎶
Fail or succeed, we're driven and compelled to try, by virtue of such deeply vivid, stimulating dreams, and every harmoniously mutual, primally yearning fiber of our amorously thrumming beings.
How beauteously sweet and appealingly you've again made the page dance before us with your own touches of genuine feelings of sensational romantic wonderment and bliss.

You had me at,"Can't get you out of my mind," and held onto my manly senses through, "your words make me To tremble, my body heating up, I dreamt you kissing me deeply, Your hands entering the trousers, Pulling me towards you by force, I moan when our bodies come together, You can show me what you want Do with me." … ohhh-MY!
Then, who could help but succumb to such irresistible depth of honestly and sincerity as, "I found someone Who sees me as I am When the night comes And I change. I'm difficult and you have to understand me. I know you want someone to love you, And I want the same thing." … sheesh! Your emotive heart and soul certainly know exactly what to say and how to convey it sooo brilliantly!

Well, here I go again writing a book in review, but, really, how could anyone blame me?
Sensual? Yes! In a most deliciously and tenderly discreet way, you've cast a spell and captured my most vivid imagination, and that, M'Lady, has always been very "hard" to do. ; )

Thank you ever-so warmly, Bianca, for sharing this lovely of loveliest sides of yourself … I love it! ⁓ Richard 🍃

LOL!
In comparison to Chris's review, mine's a dictionary. ; /

[bianca]

So many words for a short poem. It's fascinating when people appreciate your writing, and really understand the meaning of it. I love the moments when I see my lyrics on your review. It's like you wanted to underline them and to show why you wanted to comment on my poem.

It really looks like a dictionary. I don't mind, because as a writer, words are everything for me. When I saw how many you wrote, my eyes were sparkling.

Thank you so much, Richard!

[Richard🖌]

Bianca🍷
You are so very welcome … it is my delight to show you how you've made me feel.
To make your eyes sparkle✨is my pleasure. 😏

[Chris]

"...but for now,
the trying is all we have..."