Perfectly, forever.

Perfectly, forever.

A Poem by Brinda
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A poem about storng unwanted feelings.

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My heart leads me to where I don’t want to be.

And all I want is for my head to be free.

But how can it when he’s always on my mind.

He truly is one of a kind.

If my heart wouldn’t skip a beat when he’s around,

My feet would stay firmly on the ground.

If only I could talk

I would explain with the three words as we walk.

He’s honestly turned my world upside down

I just wish I could change his life around,

So that I was in his heart, perfectly, forever

But I could never be that clever.

© 2009 Brinda


Author's Note

Brinda
Excuse the terrible rhymes. I felt it so srtong that I didnt have time to recheck it before I had to go.

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ohhhh;touching sweet friend,you are so much in love but it should not be unwanted,it's a bliss,only few have courage to submerge in a passion so overpowering,you are lucky,a very honest write,Brin,and ofcourse,it would bound him into strong bonds forever.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Oh I really enjoyed this,
Like the rhymes and the font used!
Very well expressed and written!

Posted 14 Years Ago


The rhymes aren't terrible. They're pretty good, actually!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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