Blue eyes

A very old poem. A wise man always speak with love and kindness to the woman he loved.

                  Blue eyes

A blue eyed angel is crying for me.
In the turmoil of a kind love.
The paradise of burning and powerful emotion.
It can create a strange prison.

I hold her too tightly.
Then I don't hold her enough.
The fine line of give and take.
Held on by a few words.

I tried to speak softly.
I don't want to create a wall of hate and separation.
When the fire of disappointment is upon us.

I close my eyes.
I whispered to my love.
"Let's stop this craziness. Let's sit together.
I need to feel you next to me. To  stop the anger and hurt.
Let's tear down the wall of hate and disappointment. Before the safety of
our love can't be repaired."

She falls into my arms.
I whispered. "In a nightmare you didn't love me anymore. You were my only
sweet dream. And I stood alone and watched you leave my life. I fell down and could
not get up."

"I allowed you leave my life. I didn't want to make you feel unwanted.
 You were my only wish. I would drown in sadness then to hold you as a
prisoner in a love you did not desire.
For your sweet love have given peace to a man running in circles,
till he looked into your beautiful blue eyes."

My blue eye lady kissed my lips and brought me close.
Told me. " You are my only love. You have taught me love is kind and good. Open doors with gentle touches to a new world. Love is hard and need two strong people holding on tight. Love can make us crazy. We need to be kinder and celebrate our time together."

I brought my blue eyed angel closer. I kissed her hands and told her. "I will always love you. The vision of you dancing to Leonard Cohen and allowing a foolish man into your life. I will always remember."

My beautiful lady whispered. " I will always be a safe place for you. I will love you forever and a day."

Lessons are many in  life.
 
Love brings love.
Kindness brings kindness.
Some words are best left un-said.
For words can break a heart forever.

                                Coyote
                              1981

Author's Note

Written in 1981. Any errors. Please assist. Never too old to learn.

Reviews

[Que]

Love this poem, it is so sweet and wholehearted: the reader can very easily see that the two truly loved each other.

One thing you should recheck are some verbs. For example at the end, it should say "love brings love" and "kindness brings kindness" etc.
And I'm not really sure, but I think it should be written as 'blue eyed angel'. Don't really know if that's correct though. :)

Anyway, beautiful poem!
Cheers.

[MuSe Ampoule]

Beautifully powerful work!
"I whispered. "In a nightmare you didn't love me anymore. You were my only
sweet dream. And I stood alone and watched you leave my life. I fell down and could
not get up." "

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This is an excellent poem with the last stanza:
Love brings love.
Kindness brings kindness.
Some words are best left un-said.
for words can break a hear for ever.

Great words to live by!

[Marshal Gebbie]

How did it all end up?

[SamBug]

This was soo sweet and so cute! I enjoyed reading it

[Wolf's Dark Song]

A really wonderful and tender love poem. It shows how powerful words can be, either when they are said or unsaid.

[light and ashes]

Beautiful :]

[BowlofSarah]

Great emotions are shown through this poem, emotions not easily captured with words! A beautiful poem and a beautiful story :) The very last part could not be anymore true. Everyone attracts what the give but they also attract what they think.

[Starry Eyed]

Immensly, fantastic! Very beautiful. Keep on writing!

[LA Lorena]

You never cease to make me smile Coyote, your ability to weave a simple story and tell it your way, and bring it to life on paper. This is your niche.
Yes, there are issues with verbs and correct use of tense/past tense etc, but THIS is exactly what makes your work glow with charm and uniqueness. There is no other poet that can make me hear the words in my head exactly the way that I can imagine you speaking them, and this is what makes you who you are, at least to me. Thank you for sharing.

[Dragon]

This is a heart-warming poem. I love how you use your words carefully and the great emotions you send out to the reader. Love can be amazing and you might even be blinded by it but that's what you risk wanting that kind of love, huh? Amazing poem. I enjoyed reading this. Great work. :)