November

The months colors bleed
Showing off every degree of red
Showing off every degree of orange
The months grow colder

Author's Note

Nothing I write latley has come out right. I'm also an angry ball of rage with a lot of things. Take this though! It's something.

Reviews

[Tony Jordan]

I'm thinking this is a great scaffold for a larger write -perhaps describing some of those reds with simile and example.

[Einstein Noodle]

i admire you tenacity my friend! :) its haiku like ..perhaps an apostrophe here "month's" .. its stark ...to the point .. allows me all the colors of Nov. in me own head ... and tells me there is perhaps some hardships ahead ..as it will get colder ..:}
E.

[Centipedle]

I'll fix that in just a second. Yeah and what sucks about living where I live, it just started to get cold a few days ago. We've had one of the harshests summers in a long time. It was above 80 degree's farenheight for a while up until a few days ago.

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ..............

[Coyote Poetry]

Winter is coming and the change of color almost done. I liked how you expressed the change of the season with proper color and gentleness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote