The Deepest Blue

The Deepest Blue

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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I stand alone on this canvas of the starkest white midnight blue from love's palette of hues..............

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You lovingly painted me the deepest shade of blue

Softly wrapped me in a frame of golden hue
From the very first day you walked into my life
You painted me in your picture, without you

I stood alone on a canvas of the starkest white
Such a radiant speck of deepest blue
Smiling as you painted my heart into your hands
I watched from this picture without you

I am your masterpiece, one of a kind
Your own lovely creation of design to view
Forever to stand in the lonely halls of your flame
So hopelessly in love...with you

I stand alone on this canvas of the starkest white
Midnight blue from love's palette of hues
You can find me here in this picture without you
They call me......, "The Deepest Blue"

© 2013 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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time can be a friend, it can also dim the brilliance of fond memories. that is why i believe in putting our happiest and saddest moments or experiences into verse or some other form of art. you have captured this very well with "the deepest blue"
once again you have touched a part of me with your art, thank you for sharing

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I stand alone on this canvas of the starkest white


My favorite line. to me it says it all we all are cavas waiting to be painted. Nicely done.


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shows your deep talent, just super :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautiful write. I love the first stanza.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is brilliant and beautiful...yet so very sad... I love it..xx

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah...such a sad poem
She's lonely without him
Yet he adores her
What a beautiful poem
I love the picture too
Fits perfectly

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aaqww!! this is beautiful!!!!:) favorite :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on August 31, 2011
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Tags: blue, masterpiece, picture, heart

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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