Hmmmm, Let's Go

summertime

Hmmmm, come on baby let’s go

We’ll drive to the end of that old dirt road 

Where you and I use to skip stones

We’ll pop-a-top and slow dance

With the setting sun, skinny dip.

Come on.

The summer sun will set the tone

As we blaze down that old dirt road.

Hmmmm, come on baby let’s go

There’s nowhere I’d rather be

Scoot on over and sit with me

As the music plays we’ll reminisce. 

Let’s relive that first kiss.

Hmmmm, let’s go.

Reviews

[Jimmy Yetts]

A lovely invitation; one that coaxes just about everyone who grew up in America.
Thanks for the memories, Cherrie!

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you Jim

[Abraham Kureshi]

Very creative, I feel nostalgic.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you , so much.

[Crowley]

Hey I know you from years past...How the hell are you? This is so lyrical and has the greatest summertime vibe. Light and fanciful and wonderful. Grat job!

[Cherrie Palmer]

Just got back to the house, spent the day on the river and thank you.

[Relic]

Reminds me of when I was younger and we rode motorcycles. Great poem to read.

[Cherrie Palmer]

it does smell of freedom :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

You've afforded many of us a time to remember...if only we could play it again!

[Cherrie Palmer]

Those old dirt roads are everywhere:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Sounds good to me. You made an offer impossible to refuse.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Your to late I'm on to murder and mayhem, today.

[sette]

very expressive and stimulating to read all over again

[roarke]

yeah, what you said. Sublime. The best of modern romantic prose. Aces Cherrie.

[Cherrie Palmer]

I've been knocking this tune in my head for two days with the opening line. When we got home today I was ready to put it to paper.

[roarke]

A simple, single phrase that opens the universe. Lucky gal.

[Cherrie Palmer]

And they say musicals are dead

[barleygirl]

WOWZA-babycakes! This poem just catapulted me back about 40 years! This is the earthy organic kind of romance that these poor young’uns be missing, what with all their electronic courting & such! I often wish I could convey the simple pleasures of falling in lust, in the flesh, to these young folks who never get to meet half the people they’re smitten about. But here you’ve gone & done it for me! Love this! Such deliciously-described details! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Cherrie Palmer]

I'm with you, they don't know how to spend time with each other. I'm sure their not old enough to know what we know. :)

[Neville]

Hey Babe... am on my way..... bet there are a lot of us blokes out here who think similarly.. a smashing little write Cherrie and no messin................ Neville x

[Cherrie Palmer]

I was listening to some Fogerty and ended up with this little tune.

[Neville]

quite understandable then under such circumstances..... N