Such a beautiful, heart-filling picture you've selected, Cherrie🥂
I love romantic poems -- especially, those that metaphorically speak to the core of sensual desire and tenderness of the heart.
Yes … like the fireplace flame, once lovemaking is sated to a flicker, the enfolding caress of memory's warm afterglow burns eternally.
Love it, Cherrie ⁓ Richard 🍃
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
Thank you Richard:)
I think your review might be better than the poem:)
I wanted .. read moreThank you Richard:)
I think your review might be better than the poem:)
I wanted to capture the feel of the dancing light and shadows, plus I still wanted to keep it simple.
Such a beautiful, heart-filling picture you've selected, Cherrie🥂
I love romantic poems -- especially, those that metaphorically speak to the core of sensual desire and tenderness of the heart.
Yes … like the fireplace flame, once lovemaking is sated to a flicker, the enfolding caress of memory's warm afterglow burns eternally.
Love it, Cherrie ⁓ Richard 🍃
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
Thank you Richard:)
I think your review might be better than the poem:)
I wanted .. read moreThank you Richard:)
I think your review might be better than the poem:)
I wanted to capture the feel of the dancing light and shadows, plus I still wanted to keep it simple.
the first lines of your poem that dance of shadows on wall silhouettes behind a candle lights touch just melted me into my seat just grand visions painted in this short piece... a gem!!!! Mon Cherrie a gem
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
:) silhouetted shadows are romantic, when you can catch them. :)
thank you Robert
I w.. read more:) silhouetted shadows are romantic, when you can catch them. :)
thank you Robert
I was thinking about changing
than your whispers> to my heart=
to
whispers (upon my skin).
3 Years Ago
its perfect oh wait so is skin it is a sensory delight!!!
Am reading the layers within, of hope within the struggle that life can become in normal circumstances, never mind the here and now, as the flame brightens, dwindles, splutters and coughs, but doesn't go out.
Through thick and thin, it still gives light and warmth, even in these darkest of days.
I completely missed your review and I agree that time can dilute the flame if we aren't careful
3 Years Ago
It happens to us all Cherrie, which reminds me to check and see if I've missed any lately.
Ps.. read moreIt happens to us all Cherrie, which reminds me to check and see if I've missed any lately.
Ps... Santa says its okay too and not a naughty list offence 😉
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