Weighted Sun Ray's

dried flower crumbled
underneath weighted sun rays
as Summer waxed full

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That's how it is in Cali. Great Haiku

[Cherrie Palmer]

Here too praying we all get some 🌧

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I like the brevity and form of traditional haiku. This is an excellent example, the kigo, being Summer. The Japanese have their own poetry game formed by reciting an opening line then followed by a sustaining line from another player. I just finished reading James Clavell's, "Shogun" and the characters in the book use the game to ferret out one another's feelings. I found it a most interesting concept and custom. The book was fabulous, incidentally. I enjoyed your poem.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you Fabian. I try my best to express the purity of the poem. I appreciate your encouragement.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

You did a great job. 100% rating from me.

[Cherrie Palmer]

The Japanese culture is very poetic. I tried to capture the Matcha Tea Ceremony in a children's poem.
Their old Ceremonies are beautiful to watch.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Yes. I love studying Japanese culture. It's so steeped in all the fine arts.