Death Rhyme

It's a darkness poem but really short<3 hope you like.

Blood and chaos spread in the air,

The smell attraction is taking me to the grave.

I can't wait to meet him,

Babe,

His name is the darkness,

Death,

Who is death?

Rotten chandeliers in the air.

No escaping,

Oh, my dear.

I will consume you,

Oh near.

Day breaks,

Nights shine,

Death is me,

Oh, tonight.

Author's Note

Funny when I get sick I get emotional. So this poem happen I hope you like<3

Reviews

[iamshadowine]

this is so deep and so amazing, especially some of these lines:
"Blood and chaos spread in the air,

The smell attraction is taking me to the grave."
AND
"Day breaks,

Nights shine,

Death is me,

Oh, tonight."

wonderful poem!
keep writing :D

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you I appreciate*-*

[Adam Adams]

nicely written. the rhythm scheme as well as your metaphor's emotions everything's nicely decorated with given "dark-death-words". title's quite intriguing as well.

lukin fwd to reading ur work.

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you for the kindness♡♡♡

[Adam Adams]

anytime, sweety.

[Lord of mad men]

very nice! this has a lovly darkness to it. it is great!

[Pink Pastel]

Yea I love it*-*

[Surabhi Kaushik]

Some brisk writing here. Yes I can see that you were very emotional when you wrote this. Just wondering what you were thinking when you say "Rotten chandeliers in the air" Gosh! that sounds heavy..

[Pink Pastel]

I really don't know what I was thinking actually.I guess you can say imagined a woman dancing with a white dress in a mansion that looked lightful magical kind inside while some parts weren't actually all that nice. She was dancing underneath a hellfire.while on the ground it was heaven's floors.

[Surabhi Kaushik]

oh that"s some piece of imagination

[Pink Pastel]

Thanks my randomness and imagination is over the top and I am very grateful for that it gives me edurance,control of pain physically sometimes and control over emotions^-^

[DRAGO]

nice-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

[Pink Pastel]

Thanks______________________________♡

[Alice Poésy]

Such a Gothic vibe, I love it! It's very distinct. I imagined a small boat ride in the seven depths of hell, with the grim reaper as my chauffeur. Normal thoughts, right? Haha! Anyway: you're a good writer :). Great work!

[Pink Pastel]

Thanks weirdly this poem came into my mind when I was sick lol so I was like this has to be written^-^

[DRAGO]

sorry for my ignorence but what is gothic mean?

[Alice Po&eacute;sy]

Something that is dark and mysterious :). It derives from the term "Gothic", which is a style of architecture characterised by pointed arches, ribbed vaults etc. :)

[W&oslash;lfy]

Or the Germanic tribe called the Goths which trace back to 4-6 A.D.

[Pink Pastel]

Just mostly dark and black colors emotionally and physically.but I am a pastel goth girl so I am sweet but also dark.

[W&oslash;lfy]

Like dark chocolate.

[Pink Pastel]

Yup I love chocolate great now you made me hungry lol;)

[thaleeyaLuna]

Short and dark but it conveyed the message well. I like this one. :) Keep writing!

[Pink Pastel]

Thanks and you too:)

[M]

nice poem. I like it :)'
It captured my attention.

[Pink Pastel]

Awww thanks but yours are way better^-^

[Arooj Purra]

very nice poem.keep on writing.

[Pink Pastel]

Thanks girl^-^

[Arooj Purra]

you are welcome.

[TheAimlessWanderer]

ooh this is kind of sexy i like it i like these kind of darkly alluring works keep it up (:

[Pink Pastel]

oh okay and thank you

[TheAimlessWanderer]

you are most welcome even if that may have not been what you were going for lol :) great job though feel free to send me read requests.

[Pink Pastel]

oh okay and no any review is fine with me