Beastly Beauty

Will Belle ever find true love despite her looks?

Everything is in its place,
the music,
the dress,
all except for my date...
because of my "beastly" appearance,

No one to dance with,
no one to talk to,
no one to make me feel beautiful inside and out
I'm all alone in this world...
without a soul  to protect me

Until you show up...

You came out of nowhere,
through the crowd
just to say hello to me
you take my hand, and we dance,
we dance as if no ones watching

You kiss me and I stare at you blankly,
I ask: "Why'd you do that?"
and he says: "I love you for whats on the inside, not the outside"

As we look into each others eyes
I remember what my mother always said to me:
"Inner beauty if far more beautiful than outer beauty."

I actually felt beautiful,
for the first time in my life...
and I hadn't been told a lie

I found someone to adore me
for me,
and for being just the way I am

Author's Note

I hope you guys like it, I changed who had the problem again.

Reviews

[Fontane Wong]

Well planned poem. The scale is written clearly, it flows dramatically. Agree with your words too, "Inner beauty if far more beautiful than outer beauty". Now days, many people would only care on our appearences but not our personality. We need ot realiza that the way we look doesn't equals to that we're that kind of person. I love Beauty and the Beast, I learnt such a meaningful message here.

[Shantel Moore]

i really enjoyed reading this. you are a really good writer.

[roy mccarthy]

this is a great poem,
true words well said!

[E.V. Black]

It's hard for people to find the beauty on the inside. We do judge the outside, sadly enough. But I find that, once I get to know a person, they become truly beautiful because of their self.

[panheadpigments]

Kewl :D

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

All anyone wants is to be loved for who they really are, not of how they look. Loved this. Great write.

[L. Catherine]

This is perhaps one of my favorites of your Disney tale remakes. Nice work :)

[Holly Von Darling]

Really interesting reversal of roles here !

[Satchmo's Gal]

It related to the story without being a cheesy fanfic. Nice work

[TheMizFit]

This is very sweet. It feels great finding someone to accept you for who you are deep inside and not what you look like on the outside.