It Takes Two

If it takes two to tango,
tell me how you can dance
by yourself,
I'm leaving you on the dance-floor
mainly because you have two left feet

If it takes two to make you happy,
then I'll be here for you,
but if you want to make fun of my weight
then I'm leaving,
and never looking back again

If it takes two to make me smile,
and to actually laugh again
then I did the right thing
by leaving you and your horrible rhythm...

Because right now...
it only takes me!

Author's Note

I have no real inspiration for this, I just thought about it and wrote it. I hope you guys like it.

Reviews

[Valette]

This poem was very interesting. I wasn't sure about it after the first read, but on the second, I found the rhythem, and after the third time, I was really felt what you were saying.
I really liked the beginning; comparing a dying relationship with a bad dance partner, and your ending was dynamic.
Write on! I am looking forward to reading more of your work!

[Aidz]

A kewl fun write well done

[Searching 4 Serenity]

The piece was well written to have a terrific TANGO rhythm in your mind to it.

[melOH!knee]

i love it, you have, yet again, written a flawless poem

[GlamGirl]

I like it! Great write!

[.......]

This is wonderful,
Such an enjoyable read.

[Carter Meyer]

this was great! I love your style and the theme is just wonderful. Good work, and I look forward to see more from you!

[Teenage Romeo]

haha i like its good