Symptoms

Just came to mind.

These Are the signs
That it is time
Not to go home
Not to die
But just to change your life.

Do you get hot and then cold?
Do you feel that you are all alone?
Brain freezes and emo twitches?

Do you feel ever once in a while,
It is getting to hard to smile?
You sleep longer?
You stay to the dark?

You fail every test you take?
But you never seem to take a break?
You always seem to be late?

What is the things that make you scream?
I think it is time to change
That way to small ring.
The cloths that never seem to let you breath.

A time for change it is.
Feel free to learn to live.
If you can't take your own pain.
Maybe its time to not feel shame.

Live for someone else.
Live to learn to never let love rest.
How can you take away love,
When you never want to control it?

Stand and live for tomorrow.
Never for today.
Never live to stay away.
Embrace the love others everyday.
Never forget to feel.

Loving is in us.
Loving is given to us.
Never forget to trust in love.
Never forget how love can heal us.

Author's Note

Just popped in my head. Now it has popped out.Comment, Review, Rate

Reviews

[Senseless whatever]

Good write. Realization of the ever changing self. Great message that we must keep moving on, growing for ourselves and for others.

[thatbryngirl]

So inspiring! maybe just a little choppy towards the end, and lost its flow... the first four or five stanzas were awesome.

[A.Lee]

Actually, I really like this one and it didn't seem choppy at all to me. Sounds like something I would listen to with my eyes closed, just thinking and meditating on it. I love the last part. This is really good, love.

[Marlena]

This was interesting, but it felt a little choppy, and you had some grammar errors. You should fix it up a little. Otherwise, good start :)