Forever

 

Gently

I sink into you

My once strong exterior

Now coddled like a child

Within your arms

Seemingly helpless

I am safe

 

Gradually

My heart quickens

As I feel your essence

Engulfing me

An energy like nothing else

I have ever known

Joy is home 

 

Softly

You touch my cheek

A single stroke of your hand

Sends shivers through my soul

My pulse races

As I try desperately to preserve

This moment

 

Quietly

I weep tears of joy

For the moment that I am in

And I weep tears of sorrow

For the moment that will end

I just want to lay here in your arms

Forever

Reviews

[ElJays Nicholas]

The essence of you shines in this, Dani! It reaches out and embraces us with tenderness and delight. I think, anyone who has experienced such moments can find the beauty in this and can relate to how fleeting such moments can be, and the desire to "stay like this forever." I certainly can relate :) Much love to you, beautiful lady.....

[Lalli]

how romantic... well written.

you make me want this moment.. damnit i was doing so well be a cold heartless a*****e! hahaha just playin.
your soul is beautiful dani.. an honor to have you as a friend, is certianly mine.

i love reading your works.. oh j-yes.. j-yes i do

much love n respect

-Lalli

[cmaynard]

I must say that this is a beautiful poetic expression that many can relate to, hence strikes deep and resonates within.

[lauren emily]

This poem brought tears to my eyes! I love it! So emotional and..well..brilliant is the only word for it. I can't wait to read more of your wonderful work!

[Edmond Dantes]

There it is, your writing on a scene that might happen to me very soon, like 15min! ha! Yes, when it feels good & right -holding each othe rin our arms/taking turns Is so nice, your words describe it lovely--couldn't do it any better! thankyou

[Cyanide Suicide]

wow. :] i love it. ^^

[ELii]

I have has so many moments like this with my muse. I wish for it to always be that way. Very lovely write. Keep shining.

[ANNA]

I loved this poem! your so passionate with your pieces and have strong endings to them. Brilliant write. thank you for sharing!

Much lov n respect,
Anna

[Brette Medb]

Love poems have never been one of my favorites, I feel like they are over rated and overdone and too sentimental but this was a perfect blend of emotions without too much of the my love is the greatest. It was heartfelt, and moving, everything a great poem should be. Great write,


Brette

[Thomas James Martin]

This is a beautiful poem, Dani. I too like the concluding lines:
I weep tears of joy
For the moment that I am in
And I weep tears of sorrow
For the moment that will end
I just want to lay here in your arms
Forever
Tom

[Brianna Brie]

Quietly
I weep tears of joy
For the moment that I am in
And I weep tears of sorrow
For the moment that will end
I just want to lay here in your arms
Forever

That verse says it all. Gentle and serene poem with a hint of all good things come to an end. Nice write.