Effortlessly

Effortlessly

A Poem by Dani California

 

 Effortlessly

Words flow from my fingertips,

No form or structure

To my plea,

Only emotions spilling over

In streams of ink once pure.  

 

Effortlessly

You drift through my imagery,

No lust or intent

To my thoughts,

Only curious loving prose

To you with care are sent.

 

Effortlessly

Time casts spells on loneliness,

No pain or despair

Spent while here,

Only beautifully crafted plays

For us to form and share.

 

Effortlessly

This pen moves with direction,

No dark to invite

Penned to see,

Only passionately beating hearts

Keep you in mind and plight.

 

Effortlessly, I write.

© 2008 Dani California


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really nice, my friend....sometimes that is all it takes, just to pick up a pen and there it is.

Effortlessly
Words flow from my fingertips,
No form or structure
To my plea,
Only emotions spilling over
For all of the world to see.

this says it all...and it is so true.

great job, Dani.

Always,

Amanda oxo



Posted 15 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.




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This was a beautiful poem, Dani! This was a fantastic poem that flowed nicely, and had a wonderful meaning! FANTASTIC JOB!

"Effortlessly, I write"
I know the pain :( CARPAL TUNNEL

Beautiful imagery, and yet again, FANTASTIC POEM!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Effortless you write, how absoultly wonderful. Words can get mumbled and jumbled and to creat can occasionally become a chore. So I appluad you and the freedom to write that you have.
Effortlessly
Time casts spells on loneliness,
No pain or despair
A spell on loneliness, hope it's a spell to cripple it. Well written work, encouraging and inspiring. Excellent Dani.

Kim



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it.
The pleasant illustration of the creation act and the creation gift itself, makes this a good read.

A.M.


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Effortless description pleading hearts desire emotions being projected with ease
describing what it means to surrender the soul with expressional intent to draw
the reader to ponder the meaning of putting thoughts together
describing the soul into wording accentuated by the minimal you
create what inspires the heart to write. Beautifully rendered.

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Hey!
This is a great poem. Great job,
keep it up.

W.Piggy
xx

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 4 people found this review constructive.

really nice, my friend....sometimes that is all it takes, just to pick up a pen and there it is.

Effortlessly
Words flow from my fingertips,
No form or structure
To my plea,
Only emotions spilling over
For all of the world to see.

this says it all...and it is so true.

great job, Dani.

Always,

Amanda oxo



Posted 15 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.

And effortlessly grace is thrust upon this page. Well done. A wonderfully penned piece.

Posted 15 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.


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