On Promised Wings

 

 

  

From promised wings, she sees your pain;

reaching for you, unnoticed, 

her efforts in vain.

Through clouds of grey, speckled with blue,

you search the skies, lost, 

as she cries for you. 

 

“Close your eyes“, she whispers to your mind,

“believe in love, trust,

and you shall find“.

You feel her voice softly tickle your ear,

closing your eyes you imagine, 

releasing all fear.

  

Eyes slowly open, before you she stands;

joy spills down your cheeks, found,

as she holds out her hands.

She kisses your lips, then softly sings

a melody of love, hope and dreams,

while soaring high on promised wings.

 

 

Reviews

[Seriana]

Oh Dani, girl!!! This is wispy, beautiful and enchanting. One of the lovely writes that makes me breathe a huge, heavy sigh. :) It reminds me of a man who's lost all hope. At first, I think it's about an angel, reaching down from the heavens to lift him up, to carry him through his pain. But, then as I read it again, it's almost as if she's alive. There, to be with him and help heal him.

Beautifully written girl. It made me smile, huge. :)

[PENS FOR PEACE /TJ CALI..]

Wow.....D, what a beautiful and brilliant poem!
Actually sounds like the story of my life!
We all go through times in our life that can be devasting
and make us lose our ways on the road of life.
It is so comforting to know that there are always caring
arms and hearts around you to help one when they are
going through tough times in life!
My favorite line:
She kisses your lips, then softly sings
a melody of love, hope and dreams,
while soaring high on promised wings.
May we all hear the song of hope and love
in our hearts we wereare going through times of despair!
You let us hear it in our hearts with this incredible write!
Keep writing from your soul, for the good of all souls!
You are truly a brilliant poet!
TIM

[Michael X]

wow, if there ever was a poem to grace the reader, your words are a whsiper upon the soul, a kiss of creativeness and the flow is angelic and divine, I love this poem and couldnt say enough about it,
but I have to say, if I had an ultra favorite your glowing words float like starlight and the meaning
is a dream of love, and the beauty reflects your gift that runs from the core of your heart and leaves
gentle footprints across the readers soul as something that will always be remembered and when thought
upon will always inspire, thank you for sharing such ...enchantment! you've soared beyond the tops

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

This is a lovely whimsical piece. It's a lovely fantasy with a basis in fact. Great job beautifully done.
Debby

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

This is quite stunning. So full of hope and love Unconditional. A true delight to read this New Years Day. Thank you for sharing such depth. Lovely.
Light,
Siddartha

[KieraCrimeScene]

That was beautiful! of course... =]

you are a wonderful writer, keep sharing!!

[Angela]

Beautiful poem Dani. As usual, you have a special way with words. This piece makes me feel warm and comforted. You are amazing!!

[Mystery Girl]

Wow, this is amazing!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Another amazing poem

[sarahkatherine]

This is so amazingly well written, it's astounding. I wish I could write like that. You do amazing things, girl. Keep it up.

[Ocean Orchid]

This is a gorgeous piece of work .... with nicely drawn imagery .. loved the last concluding lines ...which contributes to the entire piece with an eclipsing essence .....

a melody of love, hope and dreams,
while soaring high, on promised wings.