Fever

A Poem by Dani California

Haiku dedicated to the first day of Spring

Drowsy branch wakens

Fever springs open grey blinds

Blooming colors burst

© 2009 Dani California

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PENS FOR PEACE /TJ CALI..

Just love it!
Your beautiful poem has awaken my spirit to the rites of spring!
Again a wonderful poem from such a brilliant and bright poet!
Well done dear! Your choice of words here shows your artistic cleverness
and shines your poetic brilliance to us all!
Think your poem has given me a case of spring fever!
Another great write!
TIM

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Ralphy

Awe, short and sweet for a long flourishing spring Such pretty words and colors

Posted 15 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Tony

YES! this was great and your line colors put all the more emphasis into this haiku. This is what spring is all about, a colorful awakening.

Tony

Posted 15 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Added on March 21, 2009
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