Nightfall Smiles

Nightfall Smiles

A Poem by Dark Beauty

Blood red moon
fills my breathe
dark passion falls
my lips bleed
from the cold morbid kiss

Painful transformation
so beautiful and sweet
my flesh reborn
from pure dark nectar
I begin to fade

Seeping in my veins
my new world home
shadow depths reign
posessing and cursing
thoughts remain

Imprints of light
left far behind
lurking play unfolds
as nightfall smiles
all pulse of heart gone away

I am bound in darkened laughter

© 2011 Dark Beauty

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I thought this poem had a great melodic touch to it. Well done! :)


Posted 12 Years Ago

Very nice... and poetic nature that is great :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

I really enjoyed this.. nice and dark:) xx

Posted 12 Years Ago

Blood Kiss.......Great poem....essence of the vampire I go from this.....well done x

Posted 12 Years Ago

I like it, great read.

Posted 12 Years Ago

This poem has brightened my day for sure!

I love the sheer essence your expressing through this poem as the darkness infuses the person to become one, welcoming it to their souls.

"Painful transformation
so beautiful and sweet
my flesh reborn
from pure dark nectar
I begin to fade"

A strong touch to this poem and it has a dark kind of aura from it when read. Nice write.

Posted 12 Years Ago

what about Darkner laughter?

Posted 12 Years Ago

"Dark Beauty" comes to mind when I read this. It beautiful and dark, like your name. I'm not so good with titles myself, either. Wonderfully written. Nicely done!

Posted 12 Years Ago

This was nice
i liked the first stanza a lot :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

I like it, love the way night enfolds and engulfs one firstly by the darkness and then seeping into our senses through late night sounds and smells shadows and starlight dancing celebrating the end of day. This is a beautiful addition for the Halloween season. Keep em' coming

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on October 20, 2011
Last Updated on October 21, 2011


Dark Beauty
Dark Beauty

Tucson, AZ

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