The Fairy's Love Garden

The Fairy's Love Garden

A Poem by Daytonight
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A poem about a fairy showing her love to a mortal.

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The dainty fairy wandered out
wanting to let her mortal lover know
how strong she felt about him
somehow that it would show.

She graced the land with violets
royal purple and yet so shy
so he could see she was a lady
always blushing no matter what she did try.

She filled the air with scent
from yellow jasmine hanging there
decorated all the greenery
with springtime everywhere.

She placed gardenia bushes
to fragrantly adore
showing her love for him
and maybe even more.

She filled a beautiful garden
with roses of every hue
just to let him know
she hoped he loved her too.

And in the lofty meadow
where they would meet it was sure
she placed the snow white daisy
so gentle and so pure.

So much love did this fairy
show to her mortal man
she only hoped he would love her
as only mortals can.

© 2011 Daytonight


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Daytonight
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Imagery is amazing not to mention how well you capture the feeling of love and forbidden love at that. The symbols of flowers a sign of life and hope yet the tragedy of it all is that he can't love her the way she loves him. I loved it amazing write as always :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Imagery is amazing not to mention how well you capture the feeling of love and forbidden love at that. The symbols of flowers a sign of life and hope yet the tragedy of it all is that he can't love her the way she loves him. I loved it amazing write as always :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful poem!! You pen it well and give us such vivid imagery!! Excellent work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love your imagery! Great poem. It made me smile :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love fairy poems! and you gave new life to this subject!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful picture brought forth with this one! Of course I'm partial to fairies in the first place.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked the way this one read aloud, quite a good write. it makes me wonder if you have ever danced with the green fairy before? being as I dance with her as much as possible I am impressed!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Unique in style and flow. It generates curiosity within this reader though purely on a inspirational level. Beautiful as always, your poem is well penned.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Top poem, has fantastic romantic imagery of a sensual garden flowing through the poem. Love it:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So glad to see your favourites used especially Gardenias adding their perfume to this sweet aromatic piece, she sounds wonderful and is welcome in my garden any time, good luck and keep em' coming

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Daytonight
Daytonight

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