Essence

Essence

A Poem by Deandra Dawn

Essence

Your solicitous sophistication
manifests an insensitive
absolution
an ultimately fruitless
endeavor
packaged with an uncontrollable
anger
towards truth
meaning..
the very essence of
what is
not what could be
or what has been

© 2012 Deandra Dawn


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Deandra Dawn
Again....still a work in progress

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I feel like these may be the words of a Psychologist/Dominatrix, something about it brings me a vision of a woman with her hair tied neatly back, suit, writing, pad, riding crop for the patient just in case he needs a healthy reminder.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The what could of been and what is? That is the question of all of us toward life and chance. If I could go back in time. I may have a better life? This is very good poetry. Open the door to thoughts and ponder the decision of life. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Well done! I really enjoyed this. I love the feel of your words...

Posted 8 Years Ago


When reading it, it's almost as if the reader glides along with the words. Very nice. Thumbs up on your choice of words and the flow of the piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love how I get the feeling of falling when I read this. Great word choice as well. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds like a person I'm all too familiar with..very well done with the twists and turns of your voice

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An intriguing presentation of a "person" still in progress.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is a great work
"the very essence of
what is
not what could be
or what has been"

Love this.


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a wonderful write here

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautifully described, I think you've captured the "Essence"
amazingly well, no pun intended to the essence reference.


Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on April 24, 2012
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Deandra Dawn
Deandra Dawn

Orlando, FL



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My name is Deandra Dawn and I have been writing for as long as I can remember. I also go by the name, Ravishing Raven, and I am currently reworking my website. What else is there to know when there .. more..

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