Eggs ~

A tribute to not-so-epic songs

Eggs, ~^                                        

Falling from the sky

Falling is their way

Falling all awry

Eggs, ~^                                           

Falling to the ground

Landing in the hay

Falling all around

Eggs, ~^                                       

Falling from their height

Falling in the day

                      Falling through the night

Reviews

[Pax]

clever used of eggs. i like it.

[DeliriousCerises]

How?

[Pax]

metaphorically i think..anyways i think this poem is just smart...thats all..

[DeliriousCerises]

It might have been at one time. Probably still is. I suppose they could be a metaphor for delicate matters, or life, or change, they're pretty ambiguous Though I think it's silly. Made me smile when I wrote it, but thank you nonetheless

[Pax]

your welcome, sorry if i didn't give you much good feedback..wish i could..

[DeliriousCerises]

It was fine. I just wanted more of an explination behind your thoughts so I could more fully understand your point of view.