Chapter 8: Rescuing Suri

Chapter 8: Rescuing Suri

A Chapter by Denise

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"Run Shon!!" Tyler exclaimed. Shon did just that. He tried to get away from the gaurds, but it was just too many of them. As Shon looked around to find a way to get away from the gaurds, he saw Suri being taken back behind the steel door. Shon filled up with anger, and fire spread all over his body.

 

"Now, which one of you wanna go first," Shon said to himself. The gaurds came at him with swords and knives. Suddenly, Shon let out a burst of fire that went throughout Kubar's entire layer. There were screams in all directions, but all Shon could hear was the sound of Suri's soft voice calling out for help. Shon collapsed to the ground. All the gaurds had run away in fear. Everything was silent. The slaves ran over to him, hoping that he was okay. Tyler helped him on his feet and carried him over to a wall.

 

"Shon. Can you hear me?  Wake up," Tyler said. The other slaves sat around the two boys, and watched as Tyler continued to try to wake his new friend up.

 

 Tyler thought of an idea.

 

 SPLASH!

 

 Shon jumped to his feet, shaking himself off like a wet dog.

 

 "What the heck are you guys tryin' to do? Give me a heart attack?!" Shon exclaimed. Everyone was relieved to see that he was okay and gave a small towel to dry himself off.

 

 Shon thanked them for their generosity and continued his task to save Suri. He went over to the steel door that Suri was being held hostage, and threw a fire ball at it. It blew open making an ear-piercing noise. Shon saw Suri tied up by chains behind metal bars.

 

"Oh, Shon. I'm so glad to see you," Suri said quietly.

"Hurry up and get me out of here before Kubar comes back."

 

 He burned the metal bars and chains- freeing Suri. Shon and Suri flew out of the layer just in time.

 

"Thanks Shon," Suri said giving him a small kiss on the cheek.

 

"No problem. You didn't think I was just gonna let you get away that easy without getting your number first," Shon said blushing.

 

Suri smiled.

 

 Back at the layer, Kubar was planning something that would change Shon and Jennifer's lives forever.

 



© 2011 Denise




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