The other side of the wall

you can express your feelings through music.

It was early in the morning.

I thought I was alone at school,

Suddenly I heard a sad music echoing

from the other side of the wall.

 

He sings softly while playing his guitar.

The rhythms of his music capture my heart

and blow my mind so far.

It was sad but beautiful that tears me apart.

 

It made me curious.

Is it just my imagination

or maybe  there’s  someone in the other room?

I want to see that person.

 

I took a look who is next to the wall.

He was sitting there alone with his guitar.

He saw me standing there, at the door,

and smiled at me.

Author's Note

just ignore the grammar problems...... I just want honest opinions........ ^^,

Reviews

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Loved the second stanza. I think this is great. Love the feelings I got when reading it...xo

[Starry Eyed]

Ahh.. very well done, rin nakasulat.

[Akshat♥]

this is so simply done..
so sweet:)
this can happen..i want you to make this poem
little long..i mean describe this story more...
otherwise i liked it A LOT
kEEP writing. . :)

[joshua deathdealer]

This is awesome. Love the imagery and yes please continue.

[Jena]

I need more! Please, continue! By the way, very good!:)

[Jeremy Baker]

A nice gentle poem

[Thea]

Definitely I know what you're talking about!!! Well done...Keep writing...

[Tasha]

Honestly.. I liked it a lot. I loved the imagery.
Great job and keep up the good work.
♥ Ta'Shandra