I thought he was mine forever

Yesterday, His love was mine. Now she took it from me.

Yesterday, you were my faithful lover

Now you say you’re in love with her

What the heck is going on?

I thought nothing will break us down.

You said I’m your only girl
but you replaced me with another
I really don’t understand
Why did you let go of my hand?

 

Why did you pretend to mine

And you just left me behind
Can you please explain
because you’re breaking me with pain

I thought our relationship is deep
but your love become shallow
you have changed really quick
you just disappear to me like a shadow.

 

You’ve become the person that I hate

with your sweet words that are fake

with your lies, you left me in misery

I tried to be tough because no one will comfort me

Author's Note

It hurts but there's nothing I can do but to let him go.........I really do love him.......

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

This is tragically beautiful. Great opening and the third stanza was nice. It's does hurt tremendously when we lose someone we love. Whether it be to death or this world. Most of my writes are about this type of pain. All you can do is let him go. Forgive him, forgive yourself and move on. You will grow to deal with the pain and you will meet someone who deserves your love...xx

[Shane Blackheart]

Losing someone you love can be very hard, I remember all the times I had heart break I nearly couldn't bear it. But when times passed, I had moved on and was able to see why it wasn't worth the pain :)

[sarah]

Wow I have been through this before it took me 3 years to get over it this is the most painful experience losing someone who said they weren't going to let you go and then they do

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awwww! I'm so sorry you had to go through such pain. Heartbreaks are always painful. There's nothing to stop it once it starts sometimes.. But you will learn to love another when the time comes. Right now, it's okay to grieve it off.. cry.. get mad.. whatever you have to do.. You'll find another guy who will cherish you more than that guy that left you. Be strong! Love will take you on many lessons.

[BloodyMary]

The feeling from this poem is so beautiful, I love it.

[kathrina]

I love the emotions in this poem. :)

[no one]

very emotional strong words in this poem

[Lily Mae]

I have to agree with Josh..he worded it perfectly. You held out your heart and it was broken...now take it back and heal...x

[Draven]

I know exactly how you feel....
This is a great write. Full of emotion.

[Enigma]

This is a tragic write but it flows with beautiful context and meaning. It's very meaning full and strong, relating to everyone in many ways.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Heartbreak really hurts...
I hope you feel better soon.