Empress of the Full Moon

Empress of the Full Moon

A Poem by Desmund Tiny

living an immortal life and watching humans aged and die........ being alone is really hard for her.


An empress of beauty showered in moonlight with elegance

Slowly walking into the crimson darkness

With her long silver hair

That swiftly flows in the cold air



She blooms like a scarlet rose

Bursting out charms that everyone loves the most

But this lady is a thorny flower

With her captivating beauty, you’ll bleed and suffer



She stand there under the ruby sky

Staring at the moon tainted with blood

The night was painted with a broken smile

And a thousand tears is always she had




She was cursed since she was born

To be a monster inside that human form

She cannot stay in the same place for too long

For she was destined to live an immortal life all alone




Being all alone is extremely hard

Especially for a fragile heart  

© 2012 Desmund Tiny

Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
wew........ ^^, just feeling lonely

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kind of needy, but brilliant nonetheless ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago

It was sad :( but good at the same time (:

Posted 9 Years Ago

Wow your poems render me speechless

Posted 9 Years Ago

Stately and a cry against a manifest ...destiny

Posted 9 Years Ago

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aww.. such a nice poem! loved this mysterious feeling you've crafted with the empress of the moon. i would love to know more about her. :)
and the way you emphasized those words with that font and color made the poem more anticipating.. :)
a very noteworthy write!! ♥♥♥

Posted 9 Years Ago

Nice poem*

*Tntmad ako mgreview...Pde n yan. -.-''


Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's always fun coming back to this page because you just can't predict what this writer is going to think of next. :) Very creative! The moon and the colors of an Empress and her ambiance all stand out so well while mezmerized by the drifting back and forth... such tranquility blended with exuberance makes for an excellent read! Thanks Des!

Posted 9 Years Ago

astig!! haha..
It has very powerful emotions..
Very artistically written,
Being alone is very very very HARD!! Especially when others are happy and you see them enjoying with their own friends.. but you.. you're just alone, you're isolated, like you're in another dimension.. T_T..
I always experience being alone..

anyway, This is so great! The imagery is so good!
Keep it up!! :))))))

Posted 9 Years Ago

Wow!!! what a poem....
so many emotions...
and written masterfully...the content plsu stylistically terific...
top work :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

Ahhh, what a lovely poem Des. Being alone is really hard to bear. One may really live in eternity but if she's all by herself, life would look like worthless. Never dying with a captivating beauty? Now, that's torture. A well-written piece. A very good read indeed. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on February 12, 2012
Last Updated on February 12, 2012


Desmund Tiny
Desmund Tiny

I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..


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