She's Best and I am a Pest

She's Best and I am a Pest

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
"

we're totally opposite and so how they treat us too are totally opposite

"

She’s so cute and energetic

         Unlike me who’s ugly and pathetic

 

She dresses so stylish and pretty

         Unlike me who always look so crazy

 

She’s a socialite, easy to get along

         Unlike me who always prefer to be alone

 

She soars like a beautiful butterfly

         Unlike me who’s nothing but a pain in the eye

 

                                                       For them......

 

                    She’s always the best

                 Unlike me who’s always a pest

 

 

 

 

 

© 2012 Desmund Tiny


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A well written piece.
The emotions seem raw and direct.
Your style of writing is also interesting.
A nice poem. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


wew thanks jep!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I can sense much bitterness.
Full of emotions.
Indeed, a good poem.

But I just noticed some errors here.
She dress.. must be she dresses..
and..She's socialite.... must be she's a socialite. :)

Nonetheless. this is a great work :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aww, do people have to be really cruel and look at you that way? This poem of yours is so full of emotion and I can just feel the remorse of being in such a situation. Nevertheless, this one's great and I think you've shared your heart sincerely enough. :)


Posted 9 Years Ago


:) simple but sometimes true.. ahahha GREAT WORK :D full rate both of your 2 poems :D

Posted 9 Years Ago



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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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