She's Best and I am a Pest

we're totally opposite and so how they treat us too are totally opposite

She’s so cute and energetic

         Unlike me who’s ugly and pathetic

 

She dresses so stylish and pretty

         Unlike me who always look so crazy

 

She’s a socialite, easy to get along

         Unlike me who always prefer to be alone

 

She soars like a beautiful butterfly

         Unlike me who’s nothing but a pain in the eye

 

                                                       For them......

 

                    She’s always the best

                 Unlike me who’s always a pest

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

=I fine....

Reviews

[Suditi]

A well written piece.
The emotions seem raw and direct.
Your style of writing is also interesting.
A nice poem. :)

[Desmund Tiny]

wew thanks jep!!!!

[Jed Sabffle]

I can sense much bitterness.
Full of emotions.
Indeed, a good poem.

But I just noticed some errors here.
She dress.. must be she dresses..
and..She's socialite.... must be she's a socialite. :)

Nonetheless. this is a great work :D

[Amata Luna]

Aww, do people have to be really cruel and look at you that way? This poem of yours is so full of emotion and I can just feel the remorse of being in such a situation. Nevertheless, this one's great and I think you've shared your heart sincerely enough. :)

[Kuhr Gred]

:) simple but sometimes true.. ahahha GREAT WORK :D full rate both of your 2 poems :D