She's Best and I am a Pest

She's Best and I am a Pest

A Poem by Desmund Tiny

we're totally opposite and so how they treat us too are totally opposite


She’s so cute and energetic

         Unlike me who’s ugly and pathetic


She dresses so stylish and pretty

         Unlike me who always look so crazy


She’s a socialite, easy to get along

         Unlike me who always prefer to be alone


She soars like a beautiful butterfly

         Unlike me who’s nothing but a pain in the eye


                                                       For them......


                    She’s always the best

                 Unlike me who’s always a pest






© 2012 Desmund Tiny

Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
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A well written piece.
The emotions seem raw and direct.
Your style of writing is also interesting.
A nice poem. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

wew thanks jep!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago

I can sense much bitterness.
Full of emotions.
Indeed, a good poem.

But I just noticed some errors here.
She dress.. must be she dresses..
and..She's socialite.... must be she's a socialite. :)

Nonetheless. this is a great work :D

Posted 9 Years Ago

Aww, do people have to be really cruel and look at you that way? This poem of yours is so full of emotion and I can just feel the remorse of being in such a situation. Nevertheless, this one's great and I think you've shared your heart sincerely enough. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

:) simple but sometimes true.. ahahha GREAT WORK :D full rate both of your 2 poems :D

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on May 1, 2012
Last Updated on May 3, 2012


Desmund Tiny
Desmund Tiny

I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..


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