NEVER GIVE UP

This is the third poem from my book 'DSS-The Enigma'. You can watch the video too on the YouTube channel-'TSB Worldwide'.

Never give up, even if there is

not any way.

Never give up, I think, is a

true say.

You have to follow it,

if you want fame.

You have to follow it,

if you want to win the game.

Never give up, is what, an ant

says on the land.

Never give up, is what, nomads

say in the sands. 

You have to follow it, if 

you want to do something.

You will surely succeed, 

aim could be anything.

Never give up, if in many ways,

your single way is diverged.

Never give up, if in sad thoughts

your heart is submerged.

Never give up, I think is a

true say.

Never give up, it’s

a better way.

Author's Note

Do you agree?

Reviews

[Mrudula Rani]

Excellent motto for success.
you must include a well planned trajectory to the platitude,
and you will always be a winner with this truism.

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thanks a lot for your review.

[Chris Shaw]

Perseverance is the key. You have to stick at something to achieve your goals. I can certainly agree with that Devansh. I like your references to ants and nomads.

Chris

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you so much ma'am for your review.

[Ghost writer]

I do agree, we should never give up. what's that quote? Try and fail but never fail to try.

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Giving up is nothing but a step in proving that you lost. The better way is to snatch the victory by trying for it again and again.

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thanks a lot for your review.

[Ghost writer]

you can't fail if you never stop trying, no problem.

[kentuck14]

Dev,
A good poem and a positive point to be made.
As a suggestion I would change the word "emerge" in the 3rd stanza to "submerged."

Tom

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

I appreciate the sincere review and thank you for the suggestion.