Blame, Hearts, Poems and Brokenness (Collab' with YumnaKay)

A collaboration with YumnaKay...

White-flames light gray names on the wall of shame, while pain is believed to be the seed of greed that fillets our brains

...Seamlessly... 

Vile release of craving and I scream, the butterfly sting of transparent opiates leave me stinger-less like a male honey bee, fails, money-trees, and right-of-way...

The way crawls of chaos-dust laced with lunar-graves, fight the lay-away sensation of a crow eating your fate, and sashay away...

 Princess of blame.

As an unknown band of a faraway land in the sands of time, caught betwixt the greasy slime of sublime thyme, rang out in brain-dead rhyme, I strive to achieve the hectic highs and lows of a life spent otherwise, but now time flies

 ...No compromise... 

Just a vague realization of recreational hallucination, manipulation coupled with ruffled mixtures of pictures engraved on the inside of my grave, reenactment of Satan's chimes as my mind lulls blindly, in fact dulls the excruciating pain... 

As you, Prince of my demise.

 Still rule my heart faintly...

Faintly or not, I'm not a saint, the hearts in the paint, and a swathe of harm comes from loving a card taint

As a lark starts to sing for me, but no sound abounds, tempting duress

 ...I simmer...

 My nouns are thin and drowning in a sea of crowns, my pain surrounds my frown, but still I round out syllables

Hard-turned gullible, silk worth drivel, I use a felt-tipped stain to melt my syllabus like veal

 Heal the wilting flower, still ripping hours, that powerful sensation of dripping sour dirt, my earth is shattered and lurching to the side of orbit...

 Hope you know it...

Princess of poets.

Oh don't I know it, blame, hearts, poems and brokenness...

 Swimming in deep waters and lapping around murky weed hopelessly, I refuse to admit defeat sordidly 

 Sorta crawling back, while 

...Again and again...

 Thrown into the ocean's heft, what are you besides an empty vessel, wherein a figment of my imagination lies, while a glimmer of hope sparks, making me look up to the skies

I withdraw from this state of non-being to a universe full of calamity, yet my soul searches, still reaches out to you...

Sweet Prince of broken screams.

Only you...

Author's Note

A collaboration with YumnaKay... Hope you enjoy!

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

broken screams of two poets in conversation...trying to figure it all out...feeling the inadequacies of being a poet and not being able to say it strongly enough...love the stream of consciousness in-rhyme within this piece...and done so well that except for the back and forth of the conversation, feels like one voice..

what a blend.

bravo guys
j.

[Chase Dylan]

Thank you for the more than adequate review... Two voices becoming one through storytelling, is a trademark of excellence, imo... Wonderful insight, thanks again, JEC...

[Coyote Poetry]

A lot of thoughts and emotions in the poetry. You went into many places and made the reader think and ponder your words. A great effort from two amazing writers.
Coyote

[Chase Dylan]

Thank you, Poetry... A lot of thought and emotion should always go into such a ponderous journey...

[Coyote Poetry]

You did well and you are welcome.

[Mr.Writer]

"Sweet Prince of broken screams.
Only you..."
So much feel and emotions that go into it... I really appreciate all the efforts you guys used to write this piece, it must have taken quite a while, and the effect is that the readers really enjoy it and love the rhyming affect and theme even!!
Very well done Silente and Yumna :)
Keep it up!!

[Chase Dylan]

Only took awhile because we had to wait on me to edit it, heh... Busy with my puppy... Wrote it all within the space of an hour, I'd say... YumnaKay is a brilliant writer... I merely piggybacked off the excellence...

[duff]

There are too many lines to copy and paste that I like, lol but the flow is smooth and still keeps that grimy feel. Throw in a sick beat with those words and call it a day. Cleverly done and nice work guys!

[Chase Dylan]

I def' had a beat when I wrote and edited all this together... Would not be possible without... Thanks my man

[duff]

You know it:)

[Lykos]

Another excellent piece!! Your choice of words is captivating, the flow is amazing. Im starting to really look forward to your new poems and read them straight away.

[Chase Dylan]

Thanks, Lykos, I can not... Unfortunately... Take all the credit... YumnaKay did half the work! I appreciate you reading my poems so much...

[Lykos]

Well done to YumnaKay on a brilliant collaboration as well. Its my pleasure.

[MsJewel]

You have such a unique style and yet your collaboration is seamless. I love the vivid descriptions and the effortless flow of your words. You two write so well together. Amazing poetry my friend and such a pleasure to read :) Julie

[Chase Dylan]

Thank you, Jewel... Seamless is a goal... A pleasure to read the review...

[Surya]

Yeah I did enjoyed the words and how they put in an order creating a beautiful poem...
Every word hitted me...
I liked it..:)

[Chase Dylan]

Thank you, Surya.