Riddle G (translation below)

Riddle G (translation below)

A Poem by 外人 (Gaijin)
"

Opinions and answers are welcome :)

"
Figlia del mare:
un impeto d'acqua che 
bacia la sabbia.

Translation:

Daughter of the sea:
A water impetus that
kisses the sand.

© 2012 外人 (Gaijin)


Author's Note

外人 (Gaijin)
Hope you like it !
The answer is ... Sea wave.

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Very short, but it sounds pretty. This was kinda obvious though not really challenging, a wave because it just grazes the sand and back out to the sea it goes, like a small kiss on the cheek. Daughter of the sea, meaning offspring, or a smaller part of, a wave originating from the sea. use logic and it is simple. Nice write

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A very good riddle. I like seeing the poem in two languages. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Awe, so very sweet x

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all the words you need hahaa give me a minute...
beautiful beautiful btw

Posted 10 Years Ago


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nice riddle i would havent guessed a wave lol

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very short, but it sounds pretty. This was kinda obvious though not really challenging, a wave because it just grazes the sand and back out to the sea it goes, like a small kiss on the cheek. Daughter of the sea, meaning offspring, or a smaller part of, a wave originating from the sea. use logic and it is simple. Nice write

Posted 10 Years Ago


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This is a fine poem, and proves that translation can produce lines of incredible beauty, maybe due to the direct transfer of syntax. Really good poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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.w-o-w!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Answer I do not know haha. But nice riddle.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a great riddle but I don't know the answer. :) Aha.




Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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I've waited for ten reviews on my pages....well. I love the foreign language - would it be Italian? And I am thinking - surf...
Beautiful in both languages.

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Added on June 13, 2012
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Tags: Haiku, Riddle, Poetry

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外人 (Gaijin)
外人 (Gaijin)

London, United Kingdom



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