Just Another Throw Away

I just... ~sigh~

I see myself in all of your writes,

~sigh~

But I know

That none are about me.

 

I'm a bitter girl,

Pondering on thoughts of suicide,

Filling my mind with black sorrow.

 

I'm just another stupid girl,

Just another throw away.

 

I'm a rewrite in your story,

Something easily erased.

 

You'll forget me someday,

But I cannot blame you.

 

A continent away,

You have better things to do,

Then to try to uplift the spirits of this poor girl.

 

I'm just another stupid girl,

Just another run away.

 

I'm a lost compass,

A dimming star.

 

You'll forget me,

And I fear it.

 

But I'm just a burden.

Just another throw away.

~sigh~

Reviews

[ScottWinchester]

Goodness.

This is a haunting piece of poetry. I sympathize with your inspiration here, and I believe you married skill and substance wonderfully. I wish I hadn't read it; I know these words too well, many of them I've thought myself, and remembering what I'd hope to forget is painful.

But there's no denying that you did very well, Wonderland, and that your ability is formidable. I hope you continue to write, as I expect to return and read all of your work, and I sincerely hope whatever's broken your heart has been undone.

- SW

[Graveyardfuck]

Thank you so much

[Danielle]

A sad piece, but beautifully written.
Hope things get better, love.

[Lexi Villanueva]

It's so sad but I love how it is written
has so much emotion and content.-100

[K.S.78]

"I'm a lost compass,

A dimming star."

This was so sad, but very well written and I love that line too. Very good!

[Mr.Cardigan]

really sad yet really good

[Blue Belle]

I am sorry you feel this way. You mean something in this world, you have purpose.

Favorite Lines:
"Filling my mind with black sorrow."
&
"I'm a lost compass,
A dimming star."

Take Care! Stay Strong! :)

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAutho..]

A wonderful piece, Brooke. Take heart, even a "lost compass" will point true in the absence of an iron mass of uncaring influence. Let him rust. Twinkle, sparkle in the sunlight so that another, more curious and caring passer-by will notice the charm of your reflections. Let new hands take your compass and together chart the stars anew in this dark expanse of life.

[Alisha Heistand]

Wow. very powerful write.

[LadySoDivine]

"I see myself in all your writes
But I know
That none are about me."
This stuck right into my heart. I can relate to it so much. It's a very destructive feeling we get when we realize we were just someone's plaything, someone to just pass time with. But all we can really do is try to move on. Great job, Brooke! :)

[Simon Welsh]

I like :) really bitter.

[Graveyardfuck]

Thanks