Float into despair

Sell your pessimism,

only if you wish to steal someone's faith. 

Brain, it's a grey human who exhales metaphors. 

Who knows!

Your loyal intent might double cross you. 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words. Shared some knowledge and some advice. I did like. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much for the compliment. It means a lot. :'D

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem and you are welcome.

[Richard M]

Hi Moog-Drika, Thank you for the Read Request. Not great on reviews, but really like, but took a few reads. Very deep thinking and I love the passion in your words. A great write, well done!

[moog-drika]

Thanks a bunch for your thoughts on it. They do mean a lot to me. :'D

[Ryan I]

Wow, intent is always so grey and it may hurt. Pessimism is sometimes close to realism. Good writing and thanks for sharing

[moog-drika]

I agree! And I should thank you for the review and the compliment. Happy to get some meaningful thoughts from you. Thanks a lot. :'D

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Ah, that first and last line hit hard! I think there's a thin line between being pessimistic and being realistic. We often misinterpret that...
Interesting write. :)

[moog-drika]

This is so true. I find myself to be that thin line haha. but loved your review. Thanks sooo much for all the praise. :'D

[wordman]

sell your permission would be the first mistake,then it would all run down hill from there

[moog-drika]

Mistake? I thought that's the only solution haha. Thanks a lot.

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Amada]

"sell your pessimism, only if you wish to still someone's faith" I feel the same.
You conveyed your thought very well in just 5 lines.

Thanks for sharing and wishing you a great happy new year.

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much for all those positive words. They mean a lot. :'D

[moog-drika]

and Happy New Year. :'D

[Amada]

New year has gone 😂😂😂

[moog-drika]

the effect hasn't gone. :v

[Chris Shaw]

I felt some exasperation here moog-drika. Pessimism can certainly drag others down. Felt to me as though you were wishing to convey a warning to someone. Happy New Year.

Chris

[moog-drika]

I suffer from negative thoughts occasionally that takes me to a dark imagery where I end up screaming for no reason. Maybe a side effect of pessimism. I'm so glad you felt the vibe. Thanks a bunch for this. And Happy New Year. :'D