Alabaster Salamanders

Salamander masters with alabaster blasters flap wings of disaster amidst

amassed raps and rapture

Lap the lap of lapsed taps and capture the art of lost math

Arrhythmic slashed

 I get it...

 I'm crass grass gashing all who pass

Rash and unabashed

Flash of molestation

Illustrations of automatic atomization

Sodomization of aberration 

Realization that poems written for nations slip through like brass lesions 

Crack cracked up like pixie dust

Glitter lust

Hidden dance 

All dried up 

Reviews

[MaryKC]

Hi Silente, You have such an interesting way of writing. Such an incredible way with imagery. Now, I am going to admit, I do not understand some of your poetry, but I love the rhythm of your poems. You write very much like my oldest son. He too, is much smarter than I, lol, or we just have different forms of writing. He is not on this site, but I think he would like your writing as well.

[Chase Dylan]

Hii, Mary, that is wonderful to hear about your son, will have to share a piece of his with me at some point... I will share a secret, I do not understand some of my poetry... So I think it is safe to say we are all intelligent creatures... Thanks so much for the thoughtful review...

[MaryKC]

You have a good sense of humor! Ok, sounds good to me, we are all smart!

[Chase Dylan]

Haha, well thank you again, I am not sure how to handle the cascade of praise... But I will most def' jump on the "all are smart" boat... Except dum-dums, they are not so smart...

[MaryKC]

Nope, those suckers are pretty stupid! And yes, I know I'm not funny because both of my sons let me know all the time. Except I think I'm hilarious.

[Chase Dylan]

Who am I to argue, since you all ready know... Haha, except I think we all find a certain hilarity within ourselves... At least that's all that counts...

[CMC]

You have an excellent way with rhythm, and your vocabulary is incredibly powerful. I love the line rash and unabashed, because it makes me think of someone persisting despite what others say or think.

[Chase Dylan]

Wow, Chris, thanks so much for the wonderful review... It was incredibly powerful as well... I adore that line, for much of the same thinking as you...

[CAPOLAVORO]

"Flash of molestation"..

How could you made a powerful imagery with great tone? You are such a wonder.

[Chase Dylan]

Flow landscape, dearest Cap, all about the sounds and shapes of syllable rhymes... Thanks for the wonderful review...

[Zephyr]

I love the way you use words...
Its just amazing!
You write out of the box.:)

[Chase Dylan]

Thank you, dear Naat, your review is out of the box of boxes...!

[Zephyr]

My pleasure......:)

[emmajoy]

Love the musical movement here< Tis as if you're winding emotional thought around your readers, wanting, needing them in your world .. or, maybe showing it so they leave you happily alone to stone in it !

[Chase Dylan]

Hah, either way... As long as peace can be found, alone or mobbed by the lyrically hungry... Thanks so much, EJ... The words of a talented writer such as yourself go far in my book...

[Wajiha Nayeem]

i just wanna say one word..''keep it up''!!

[Chase Dylan]

I just wanna say one word... Thanks so much...!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hahaha...!!!

[Ana B.]

I loved the game of words displayed here :) A true ''work out'' for the brain, and as a bonus, a healthy humor. Marvelous work dear author :)

[Chase Dylan]

Thank you, Ana...

[wordman]

you have a way with words my friend

[Chase Dylan]

Means much coming from the Wordman himself. Thanks...

[Jessica Lima]

This felt like a tongue twister, fun to read. I didn't understand much though. That's totally my fault. I like simpler things. But intricate isn't bad at all. You will appeal to more intellectual crowds I'm sure.

[Chase Dylan]

Never discount oneself out of understanding abstract meaning... Tongue twister it is indeed, and more thought is put into sound and letter shape, than "being smarter than the average"... Simple, intricate... W/e works for you! (I do not understand some of the stuff I write)... So I think I am leaning more towards the "simple" crowd, myself... Haha, thanks for the lovely review...

[Jessica Lima]

Thank You! However, there's nothing simple about how you write. I gain some IQ points by reading your stuff :D

[Chase Dylan]

You humble me... I gain happiness points for appreciation of my work, so we shall consider ourselves even...

[Nipplegrinder]

This is absolutely fantastic! Followed kittenincake to this. Why, oh why, isn't there a love button on writerscafe?

[Chase Dylan]

I do love the love of my light, Kittenincakez... She is a fantastic writer as well! You can certainly adore my writing in your heart, that counts! Thanks for the review...