Alabaster Salamanders

Salamander masters with alabaster blasters flap wings of disaster amidst

amassed raps and rapture

Lap the lap of lapsed taps and capture the art of lost math

Arrhythmic slashed

 I get it...

 I'm crass grass gashing all who pass

Rash and unabashed

Flash of molestation

Illustrations of automatic atomization

Sodomization of aberration 

Realization that poems written for nations slip through like brass lesions 

Crack cracked up like pixie dust

Glitter lust

Hidden dance 

All dried up 

Reviews

[MaryKC]

Hi Silente, You have such an interesting way of writing. Such an incredible way with imagery. Now, I am going to admit, I do not understand some of your poetry, but I love the rhythm of your poems. You write very much like my oldest son. He too, is much smarter than I, lol, or we just have different forms of writing. He is not on this site, but I think he would like your writing as well.

[Chase Dylan]

Hii, Mary, that is wonderful to hear about your son, will have to share a piece of his with me at some point... I will share a secret, I do not understand some of my poetry... So I think it is safe to say we are all intelligent creatures... Thanks so much for the thoughtful review...

[MaryKC]

You have a good sense of humor! Ok, sounds good to me, we are all smart!

[Chase Dylan]

Haha, well thank you again, I am not sure how to handle the cascade of praise... But I will most def' jump on the "all are smart" boat... Except dum-dums, they are not so smart...

[MaryKC]

Nope, those suckers are pretty stupid! And yes, I know I'm not funny because both of my sons let me know all the time. Except I think I'm hilarious.

[Chase Dylan]

Who am I to argue, since you all ready know... Haha, except I think we all find a certain hilarity within ourselves... At least that's all that counts...

[Mr.Writer]

Woah, woah, slow down there Silente!
Ya going way too fast and I know there's no audio included in the awesome, unique poem of yours, but you let the readers imagine and enjoy the flow and pace!
Well done Silente! :)
Loved it!

[Chase Dylan]

Wow, Mr. Writer, you are too kind... There is always audio to my writing, I just keep the source inspiration to myself, usually...

[Mr.Writer]

Lol :D No problem!

[Stacy Purvis]

Ha ha! This was rediculously entertaining! The rhyme scheme was raving like a ghetto blaster!!!

[Chase Dylan]

Thanks, AP, I appreciate it! Ghettttooo blllassstterrr...!

[duff]

Digging it for sure my friend. I like the title and the last three lines have this emotional subtlety that cap the whole thing off. Nice work man.

[Chase Dylan]

Long time no talk, my friend Duff, your words are much appreciated... Thanks so much...

[duff]

You're very welcome. Slick stuff as usual my man

[Sinbulvinter]

God, I am addicted to your flow. It's so awesome.
Great poem here.

[Chase Dylan]

God... Your addiction to my flow is quite appreciated, thanks much... I love horror, and am planning on peeking at your book here when I have time...

[Sinbulvinter]

Yeah, you got some real skills in your flow, yo.
And feel free to check it out. The whole first book is already published. Its more of a psychological thriller with a touch of horror fueled gory goodness. I'd love to hear your thoughts on it. =)

[Lykos]

This is very different to the poems I usually read, but brilliant nonetheless. Well done!

[Chase Dylan]

Thank you, Lykos, different is splendid in my book, glad you agree!

[Lykos]

No problem. I love finding new ways to write poems. Definitely will try my hand at one at some stage..

[Alex Ware]

It's like beck lyrics, pretty enjoyable :)

[Chase Dylan]

I had to look up what "Beck lyrics" are... I must say... They ARE rather enjoyable... Thanks, Alex...

[Kittenincake]

I like the visualization in this, especially embellishing crack as pixie dust and glitter.

[Chase Dylan]

I like that you liked it, and crack is for pixies, don't you know...

[Kittenincake]

That's why they stay so skinny.

[Chase Dylan]

Heavy-set pixies are known for skinny dipping as well, however it is much less repeated in poetic line... Oh you meant...

[Kittenincake]

Is it still skinny dipping if the pixies are heavy-set?

[Richard McLin]

Well this ones a bit hard to review lol. Fantastic, bombastic, in your face, all over the place, and highly original. Loved it, and feel like it's a style I can get behind.

[Chase Dylan]

Hah, hard, but you bombarded it with powerful words... Thanks, Richard, and I am fond of the style as well...