Separation Anxiety...

Appeasing demons...

Separation anxiety makes me uneasy, shapes me easily, queasy, I feast evilly upon the greasy lips of past travesty

Fast fallacy and i'm done, shes always falling over herself to cry for mercy and i'm stunned

Why should I give her thirsty guns to use against me

 I'm first...

 The one who shared mirth dreamily

Steaming and wheezing I refuse to give up wearily, barely surviving her Aires, I aim to breathe air when sky-diving 

Laughing and crying, i'm scared when repeating scalded lines back in tragedy

Consumed by the majesty of mages tact

I'm track-less, a puppet in repair

Fact-less, like I know only rare crafts

I give up... 

This tale is a wrap-dance, and i'm done making soul-aching payments

Ailments of whole-wrecking statements

Laments of shocking gray pavement, and I hung silently till the sun is gone

No more bereavements, believe you, me

I'm sincere when I appease demons with rum   

Reviews

[Maria]

This is a totally rad piece of writing, Silente and I applaud you once more. I love the fact that you have a way in putting down words that will go well with whatever you are wanting to talk or write about. I also have seen your collabs with Duff and the others, and those are superb as well. I have much to learn, and will continue to do so. Great writing my friend. Keep it up

[Chase Dylan]

Why thank you, Maria, for the continued support and appreciation shown... Means the world to hear, and aye... That is all I really CAN do...Pick out words that I feel tie into the emotions of the moment... Those writers are amazing, and I would encourage you to check out everyones writing... Mind-blowing stuff...! We all have much to learn, the grave is the end of the lesson, until then... Do your best and always show-up, haha... Thanks again, and keep writing as well...!

[Maria]

Thanks I am reading alot of stuff on here, and trying to learn the basics of Haiku and Micro Poetry as well...Never heard of that until just now...but sure will. Thank you for your encouraging words

[Chase Dylan]

Of course, I do not even now the fancy terms, myself, so do not feel bad... Hah

[Maria]

Lol. Thanks you made my day

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I think only the inner demons can be appeased by rum 😉😛
Some very catchy phrases here. "A puppet in repair" was what I loved the most.

This was a cool read for me. Nicely penned, Silente 😊

[Chase Dylan]

Glad to have penned a cool read in nice repair... That line is one of my fav's as well... Thanks...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Haha yes it was. You're welcome. I'm beginning to understand your writes 😛😊

[Chase Dylan]

The beginning of understanding is the first step towards... Needing more understanding to understand the ever-present load of things you don't understand... Lol

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Lol you're funny 😛

[Chase Dylan]

Only on Wednesdays...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Interesting... Wednesdays are special? Lol okay 😛😛

[Chase Dylan]

Lol, no, I just looked at what day it was when I replied... I mean... Yes... SO special...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Seems more to depend on the mood than the days 😛😉

[Chase Dylan]

... Well, being an emotionally driven creature... I, as a human, would have to agree with you... The humor does indeed reflect mood, more so than what day it is of the week... Haha...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

But probably work days influence the mood too 😶

[Chase Dylan]

Any sorta day can influence ones mood, work is a big one, that is true... I would say more-so, than days... Each moment is a chance at a change of mood...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

True that :)

[pia]

woah this is super thrilling
i love it !!

[Chase Dylan]

Whoa, your review is equally, if not more thrilling... Thanks so much for the love!

[Sinbulvinter]

wow, such a lovely choice of words, powerful message, and awesome rhyme structure. Great work here.

[Chase Dylan]

Thank you, Sin, glad this poem was of your tastes...

[Cœur]

I'm at a loss for words. I've had people tell me your work was good, but I never thought it was this good. Your word choice is amazing, and as Mr Writer said, horrific. Very beautifully done.

[Chase Dylan]

Well... Thank you, C... I am a bit perplexed as to who the "people" are that speak of my good work, haha... But I shan't question a compliment of such grand design... Thank you much, your review is amazing...!

[Mr.Writer]

Woah! A very horrific, thrilling piece that engages the audience to the fullest extent Silente!
The imagery is awesome as well, very descriptive and flowing well.
Keep it up :)

[Chase Dylan]

Whoa... What a satisfying word... Horrific... I shall try, Mr. Writer. Thanks, and you as well...

[Mr.Writer]

Lol no problem Silente :)