Warrior

Warrior

A Poem by Solar Redemption

There's a hurricane

brewing in my heart.

Any second now, it will burst.

Ready to unleash every inside.

Finally,

Everything I see is crystal clear.

Nothing can keep me from

conquering my fear.

I may not have won every battle.

But I have won this final war.

© 2018 Solar Redemption


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Before I forget to mention it – LAST LINE: do you mean “won” instead of “one”!??! Thank you for read requesting me. I don’t see you here in my newsfeed much, so I might forget to read you (I’m old & forgetful), or I might not notice you’ve posted something new. I always enjoy seeing a new poem from you here. I love the way you use the motif of a warrior when thinking about how to attack life. Your words are a huge inspiration for people who are feeling down & out. Sometimes we need to keep pushing ahead & not worry about the places where we faltered. The last two lines really hit home! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Solar Redemption

3 Years Ago

Thank you for pointing that out to me, I didn't notice it before.

As for newer poems,.. read more
barleygirl

3 Years Ago

Yes I did read that . . . good one . . . I understand . . .


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i think we was meant to be in a war most of our lives
seems we are fighting with our hearts most of the time

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Before I forget to mention it – LAST LINE: do you mean “won” instead of “one”!??! Thank you for read requesting me. I don’t see you here in my newsfeed much, so I might forget to read you (I’m old & forgetful), or I might not notice you’ve posted something new. I always enjoy seeing a new poem from you here. I love the way you use the motif of a warrior when thinking about how to attack life. Your words are a huge inspiration for people who are feeling down & out. Sometimes we need to keep pushing ahead & not worry about the places where we faltered. The last two lines really hit home! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Solar Redemption

3 Years Ago

Thank you for pointing that out to me, I didn't notice it before.

As for newer poems,.. read more
barleygirl

3 Years Ago

Yes I did read that . . . good one . . . I understand . . .
You're right, the most important is to win the war. And it's like a brave warrior talking. Well done friend!!!!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Solar Redemption
Solar Redemption

Reedley, CA



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Alternative goth, shy, loves music. I typically keep to myself, and am not very expressive. But when I write, it's like I'm some place else. I've been gone for a while, and I'm working on getting.. more..

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