I'm Done

I'm Done

A Poem by Evelynn

It’s not any different
It’s the same as before
You’re still not sorry
And I can’t take it anymore
You say it was a bad day
And how you just blew
Well, it was right in my face
And guess what, I’ve had enough too
So you can take mean words and issues
And go walk out that door
I don’t have to take this and you know what
I’m done, I won’t take this anymore

© 2018 Evelynn


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Absolutely therapeutic Evelyn. Going through a tough time is never easy and when a person is being difficult it can really wreak havoc on your mind and health. So important that we shut doors to those who don't deserve to be inside anymore. Well said and firmly written. Love it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Evelynn

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much



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I love how simple this is. It's a bit vague, but it adds mystery. I like it a lot.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Evelynn

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
I wish more strong self-preserving voices would write poetry like this . . . I get so tired of the victim or blame approach to heartache. I like the strong rhyme & rhythm, but most of all, the gentle tones of being fed up -- no drama or ranting, but just making up one's mind. So many times I see people who need to adopt this approach toward their unsatisfying connections! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Evelynn

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
good for you !but maybe he needs some help

Posted 6 Years Ago


Absolutely therapeutic Evelyn. Going through a tough time is never easy and when a person is being difficult it can really wreak havoc on your mind and health. So important that we shut doors to those who don't deserve to be inside anymore. Well said and firmly written. Love it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Evelynn

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much
AMAZING!!!! There's nothing else to say

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Evelynn

6 Years Ago

Awww, thank you :)
Shattered Rose

6 Years Ago

just telling the truth
Well done excellent and so proud of you standing for what’s right protecting your heart - for out of it comes the most precious things- nobody has right to invade your boundaries and hurt you- wonderful strength in your words🌹

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Evelynn

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Always and anytime my pleasure🌹
sounds pretty definitive. doors swing both ways but not in this case. good write ...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Evelynn

6 Years Ago

thank you!
Evelynn,
A well written poem boasting of courage and integrity. A ballad for abused women of all cultures. Thank you for words that need to be heard by everyone.
Blessings,
Richie b.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Evelynn

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reading
Bravo! There is great strength and conviction behind these very powerful and brave words. It is not easy to walk away but so important when deep in your heart you know you must or suffer dearly in the end.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Evelynn

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
Were I the one this is written to I'd know why you're saying what you do. But I'm not. So to me, it's someone unknown, upset with someone not introduced, for unstated reasons. So when you say, "I won't take "THIS" anymore, the fact that I don't know what "this" is, or why it matters, kills any chance of my caring. But I would like to. So instead of telling the reader how you feel, make THEM feel. Pull the strings of their emotions. It's more fun to write, and read.

Hang in there, and keep on writing.

Jay Greenstein
https://jaygreenstein.wordpress.com/category/the-craft-of-writing/

Posted 6 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

JayG

6 Years Ago

Look. You ASKED me to critique your work. And I have to assume you checked, and knew that I give a c.. read more
Hēdonē

6 Years Ago

Actually, I didn't ask you to critique my work unless you can magically read my writings that aren't.. read more
JayG

6 Years Ago

Ahh...You were so adamant I though you were the one who wrote the poem. I apologize to Evelynn for t.. read more

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