The Deep

The Deep

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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this is a lipogram i wrote for a class (same class the cinquaine was written for) the lipogram, for those who are unfamiliar with, is a poem using one vowel only. i chose "E"

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"The Deep"
The endless Ether
left deep clefts                                        
heed me
keep knees free
                                     enter the descent
                                                                     Hell's decree bends the rent
See me!?
Steep we creep
Spent.
Endless Ether we flee
11/28/2018
E.

© 2019 Einstein Noodle


Author's Note

Einstein Noodle
I struggled to have a theme ... would really like to know if you have a sense of one .. :}

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It’s a different kind of creative joy when we are able to produce worthwhile expression within the limitation of format and structure. For me that’s the supreme kind of satisfaction. I read the endless twists, turns and bends as we navigate, crawl, hurtle through the all pervading ether to our ordained ends. Appreciated very much, E 💕

Posted 2 Years Ago


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DIVYA

2 Years Ago

Oh bedtime then! :)
GoodMorning hugs! And do grab a bit of sleep :))))
Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

headed that way now ;)
DIVYA

2 Years Ago

.......😉☺️😊.......



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We are all fleeing death the moment we arrive

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

yes we are, aren't we...fleeing right into its arms ;))))))))))) luv ya Lyn ...luv ya reviewing alwa.. read more
never heard of it but from what ya say and what I see, you paid more than just lip service to this particular form... even without the explanation tho this would have been a most enjoyable and intriguing write, in its own right... nothing quite like hurtling through ether, ether is there E.... N..... D x

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

yes it is ..undeniably so Neville ... so much mystery with every breath isn't it my friend ;)))
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Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

ps. caught your E...N...D ... you little devil you ;)
Neville

2 Years Ago

ha.. no flies on you my friend.. they used to call me neville the devil... dunno why.. dont s'pose i.. read more
Very Clever Gene, a very smart brevity format delivering as always in the unique Gene style. I like it!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

glad you enjoyed reading my friend .. using one vowel only forces a certain brevity i think .. this .. read more
It’s a different kind of creative joy when we are able to produce worthwhile expression within the limitation of format and structure. For me that’s the supreme kind of satisfaction. I read the endless twists, turns and bends as we navigate, crawl, hurtle through the all pervading ether to our ordained ends. Appreciated very much, E 💕

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

2 Years Ago

Oh bedtime then! :)
GoodMorning hugs! And do grab a bit of sleep :))))
Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

headed that way now ;)
DIVYA

2 Years Ago

.......😉☺️😊.......
I think the theme here is the struggle, The victory of light in the darkness....the listening of sound in the silence....A calliope!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

a calliope!! oh my goodness...that's perfect Crippled Queen .. i can here it as i struggle and loose.. read more
Wow- have never heard of this form and how well you did with it E.! “Steep we creep...Spent.”- love that line. Once again I am schooled by you- many thanks!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

oh darlin' you humble me ..truly blushing ( a bane for me in high school:) for me the line that drew.. read more
Annette Pisano-Higley

2 Years Ago

.........:))))))
Interesting and enigmatic my friend. I can follow this through on many sensitive levels. Perhaps and this is my favourite we need to open ourselves up to the ether to create fully. An excellent piece Gene.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

thanks Ken ..i do agree ..our ether aura can always use a probing into ;) yes... very enigmatic .. b.. read more
Beyond the clouds, flying free.....or perhaps hell opening up and allowing you entrance. In either case, the flow of words is mesmerizing. Interesting form. Of course you chose "E"....we all knew you would! :) Lydi**

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

ahahahaha thank you for saying so Lyd! yes! "E" of course :)))))))))) and yes those are the question.. read more
Lydia Shutter

2 Years Ago

Sending hugs your way, my friend. Take care.
the cinquaine was spreading like a virus here (of course the very good one ;) ) now You give us this challenging form, I'm sure it will be spreading like a virus too :)

I like the format, the way Your words played slowly as they were going down the page, made feel like I'm floating free as a tiny atom in the air, our years going down like Your words, then we will be buried under earth, going deep but not there, going deep up, as our souls fading, flying into the sky, this one is very interesting and have a profound touch, and surely what else than the E You would use as a vowel ;)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

yes...of course the E ;)))))))))) and yes yes yes ..going deep up ..you are so perceptive Light! I a.. read more
You're really becoming very creative with this class.
Bet you had to think long and hard just using one vowel.
On the gravity theme.
It has gone down well with me.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

ahahaha its the gravity of the situation i am sure ;) so happy it went down well sir ... when i take.. read more

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