God is a Metaphor ... With All Due Respect

God is a Metaphor

erupting with fingering phrases

glissando winds ripple limbs

frisson rises in all those places

dawn's sun breaks and swims 

how can i think what God is?

newly fallen snow, fresh kill 

heat steams wavering over

shaded rooms like  a poet's quill

enlighten corners like no other

how can i say who God is?

tuck and rolled white-red leather

the clouds lay cotton in the valleys and

in a faceless place the eyes are a trema

prickly pare cactus bleeds bended knees

how can i see where God is?

immovable and curdled milk senses

mixed in whiskeyrum tumblers 

ice hiccup clinking glass  ..... a 

frenetic lens

 ....and

stippled integrity ...and 

icy fingers probing the most difficult; 

forcing open brittle parchment

peering

loving parts i will not admit

God is a metaphor

With all due respect

Author's Note

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Beautiful deep dive of introspection, thoughts and words here E. "God is a Metaphor...With All Due Respect"- a knockout of a title! Exquisite language and great form with questions asked and answered-or not really... Maybe we are all metaphors. Loved this provocative poem E. Happy 2020!

[Einstein Noodle]

thanks Annette .. Happy and prosperous 2020 to you as well ... i try hard to find God ...most all the time .. and it occurred to me how my endeavors were very much focused on getting to Him ... understanding and communicating with God .. and for the life of me we have no word for God .. not really .. none that describe or even attempt to describe God's power, Majesty, beneficence etc etc. ... then it occurred to me the best we do is metaphor ;) thanks so much for taking time Annette ... its a treat to have your visits!
E.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Awwww- you are too good to me E.! Love reading your work and your many layers of thoughts. Gives my brain a workout!:))

[Robert Trakofler]

brilliant Mr Einstein! i would be so bold as to say that "God" is the metaphor to end all metaphors... all others pale in comparison:) To define the indefinable and divine the intangible can I believe, only be done as such. I once tried to explain a painting to a blind person that has never seen and all I had was a bag of metaphors and like "god" the painting's image could only be in the relation of the context of the viewer:) this is a gem, good sir Doodley

[Einstein Noodle]

oh man!!! that's it exactly ... as so far as i see it anyway .. God bless you Bad Bun ;) thank you for taking time and letting me know your thoughts ... great new avatar sir! ... i think it shows your character ... sound wisdom with a twinkle in the Bunny eye :)
E.

[DAH]

Philosophically sound in all of its presentation. Yes, I agree, "God is a metaphor",
and, as John Lennon stated in 1971, "God is a concept by which we measure our pain". Being a devout Atheist, both of these opinions work for me.

This is stellar work, EN, nicely played.

DAH

[Einstein Noodle]

a devout atheist ... wow! i would love for us to live close by ... and like i said to Lydia .. sit at the most bohemian coffee spot and just talk ... the ideology of atheism escapes me to no end ... really appreciate your tolerance in reading and reviewing my friend ... thank you so much for your encouraging words
E.

[DAH]

My pleasure, E!

[DIVYA]

To begin with..."shaded rooms like a poet's quill" ~ such an amazing metaphor there, dear E!

I had to look it up exactly and by a dictionary, a metaphor is a figure of speech in which a word or phrase is applied to an object or action to which it is not literally applicable. And that convinced me...God is indeed a metaphor for the dawn's sun breaking and swimming away, for freshly fallen snow and fresh kill. Yes He is a metaphor for bleeding, bended knees and yes yes my friend, He is certainly a metaphor for ice hiccupping and clinking glass in a glass, under the silken skirt of an old, mellowed kind of whiskey...

Bless God for all the beauty, in everything...

You are such a mind-blowing poet..Kudos E!

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha well ... mind blown perhaps ;))))))))))))) you are so kind and encouraging ... so so happy you let yourself into this one ... i didn't want it to come across as irreverent in any way ..yes! Bless God for it all eh!? thanks so much for reading .. i feel pretty gratified by your response Divya .. thanks you ever so much!
E.

[DIVYA]

I'm all happy and smiling here :)))
You're very very welcome my friend!

[Chris Shaw]

As I have grown older, I have grown apart from my old faith. I find it increasingly difficult to believe in a Maker when there is so much destruction and misery inflicted on so many. And yet the closer I get to nature, I still find myself asking and pondering on those questions. You see, I can't quite let go altogether. I am like a child clinging on to the string of a balloon in a very strong wind. I haven't completely given up. I like the idea of God being a metaphor. As a poet, metaphors play an important part. A thought provoking read Mr E.

I have come back for another read. There are so many great lines here and interesting vocabulary. Always good to read you.

Chris

[Einstein Noodle]

thanks Chris! perhaps the difficulty you are experiencing is that you are trying to use our very human brain ;) consider this science ... nothing created .. nothing destroyed .. known as the Law of Conservation of Mass ;) now ... try thinking about this ... i read it in an AARP rag just yesterday ... scientifically speaking .. there are more atoms in the human body ... than stars in our universe!!!! wow! right!? .. now let go ... i love your review Chris ... my view of things has changed over time as well ... would love to meet you for coffee and bagels to just talk ... about God ... what could be better says i!? really happy for your visit!
E.

[Chris Shaw]

What an interesting bit of information you have given me and also an alternative way to consider my thinking. Bagels and coffee sounds great. What a pity you live so far away Mr E. I would have a long way to swim :)

Have a lovely day.

Chris

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahah we can meet in the middle :))))))))))))))

[Eilis]

Your title drew me in to this one. It is a challenging poem in large part, I think, because it mirrors the inner universe. It is human to question and doubt. I believe this is part of our purpose as creatures with a brain wired for advanced thought. However, it isn’t always easy to face where the questioning leads.

At points, this feels like a dialogue with the creative nature housed within us. Some people call it the muse, but I feel it’s something self-contained that is prodded for whatever reason at various times and seeks a way out. As though within each human being is something like an individual universe. Or perhaps an individual galaxy where we are the inhabitable planet waiting to be dressed with the necessaries for living a fulfilled life.

The dance here between the corporeal and the ethereal is stirring because it’s almost like a moving aside of a veil to examine all the feelings and offer critical perspective. It’s an interesting poem, E. Thought-provoking. I don’t feel like my thoughts are necessarily in line with your intention, but it is intellectually stimulating to ponder the ideas nevertheless.

Really enjoyed reading this one. Some great unusual word choices.

[Einstein Noodle]

thank you so much for your sensitive and thorough read of this Ellis! i am an introvert and find most of my challenges within ... i love what you say about the universe within .. like i was saying to Chris .. i recently read in an AARP piece that science has declared there are more atoms in the human body than stars in our universe .. how beautiful is that?!!! if you ever would like to share what your beliefs are i would love to hear ... we are after all a many, varied, wonderful and splendid thing ;) https://youtu.be/GnDtxiNwDS8
i really appreciate you my friend .. thanks for taking time!
E.

[Eilis]

That’s an astounding bit of information on the human body. It’s not difficult to be surprised by the intricacy of the earth and all that inhabits it. I suppose I am a Christian of the Thomas variety. I believe we are meant to ask and seek understanding so that there is a certain intellectual security within our beliefs. Why would we have such capacity to think if we were not meant to use it—this is my question to myself and something I try to live by.

All the best, E. I did enjoy this poem very much.

[Einstein Noodle]

back at ya Ellis! you make a strong point .. and i have heard most of us barely use 10% of our nogs ... imagine what we are missing eh!?

[Anthony]

Although I believe in God, this was truly something else. You have this ability to just project imagery beyond my imagination.

[Einstein Noodle]

Ant! i have to come knock on you pages .. not sure we have met until now ... so double thank you for stopping to read ... we share a belief in God then my friend! isn't that groovy ;) and may your imagination catch up to shooting stars and sprouts :)) thanks again for taking time and leaving your impressions .. that's important you know ... peace and joy!
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes when we look at poetry, some of my students believe that the metaphor is actually the real thing---

[Einstein Noodle]

well ...........it is isn't it??? :))))))))))))))))))))))))
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

there is beauty, there is ugly, there is nature, there is man-made....but who gave us all that we see and as humans think...feel...wonder...and is God in that parchment, is God behind the words we write...
as Joan Osborne sang.."what if God was one of us, just a slob like one of us?"
maybe just walking among us and watching how we react to all that is there...whether he or she is behind it or what...
much posed here....much to ponder...makes us stop and question exactly what our beliefs are at this point in our lives, considering all some of us have lived through.
great poem...maybe life is just a hiccup...seems that short sometimes...that random.
j.

[Einstein Noodle]

thanks for stopping always jacob ... and for your thorough and thought provoking review in itself! .. i think the truly "lost" may be those of us that have given up the ponder ... not in the "freeing" sense ... but in the choice of unbelief .. you know jacob ... we are a special brand, us poets ... so many of us can go out and see the miracle in a simple blade of grass ... and then do our best to share that experience creatively ... my mother-in-law use to say that there is a poet in everyone ;) my faith base is in the teachings of Jesus ... funny you mention maybe God is one of us ... as that is exactly what the Bible says happened .. tho i dare say Jesus felt all the slob in humanity .. He chose otherwise ;) thanks so much for sharing your thoughts on this and all the poems you review jacob ... love on ya sir!
E.

[Lydia Shutter]

Very interesting write here, E. So you are of the opinion that G-d is everywhere and has created everything. Not sure I really believe. I am rather agnostic myself. Thought provoking lines in this one, E....I loved the thought of ice hiccuping! :) Unique and well written. Lydi***

[Einstein Noodle]

hello me luv Lydia!! so happy always for your input ..there is a lot in history and everyday life that is discouraging ... as soon as we declare "we have the real way" ... our own hypocrisy blares out like trumpet blasts ... i think that is the solution we all need to wrestle with ... as agnostic do you cease to "seek"?? i am a very internal person .. an introvert on any of those tests our employers give ... it seems i forever look in for answers, questions .. sacred places ... and once in a while i take a breath in wonder at creation all around us .. it gives me such a sense of gratitude and comfort .. those scents on the breezes that portend spring, or winter or storms .. the bigness of everything .... i was kind of wondering about the ice hiccup thing .. not sure of it as it is a bit of a stretch ... so thanks for mentioning it .. you are my best critic ma'am ... from the time i first arrived here at the Cafe' ... respect ma'am!! and love and peace!
E.

[Lydia Shutter]

Yes, I am always searching and I do love nature. A walk along the shoreline clears my head and makes me feel so alive. I am an extrovert....usually. E, you have been a friend at the cafe for years and I appreciate you. Lydi**

[Einstein Noodle]

luv you Lydia ... as much as one can at the Cafe' .. you be well .. and have the best of the day

[Lydia Shutter]

And the very same to you, E!

[Fran Marie]

I like how you covered the wha t, who and where
of God within this poem ..all we may know
is He is omnipresent...I d say you nailed it here
E..God is this *all things* all knowing* plus huge
metaphor..btw love the title..a very creative piece
about a subject so many can debate and / or agree

[Einstein Noodle]

yes! and i hope the discussion remains open for all ... sometimes i think of God's presence in all things as being evident on the atomic and sub-atomic levels ... everything we see this electric vibrant spinning swirl of dynamic energy ... coming together, moving apart ... when i think that way .. i imagine i feel a buzzing and humming of that power and energy ... like when we hear and electric transformer buzzing ;) i agree with you, Fran .. God is omnipresent ... Vikings called Him "All Father" ;) thanks so much for reading and responding with your impressions Fran .. much appreciate it!
E.

[Fran Marie]

you're most welcome sir..great interesting piece ..no doubt that will draw many views and discussions;