Stained black

Wings black as night

Heart cold as snow

He won’t protect you

He’ll only deceive you 

Once a warrior of light

Now a soldier of dark

The most evil creature I know

The one whom I despise

My angel

Reviews

[Butters]

Honestly, I LOVE this!! I don't know what else to say, it's just good. For the most part I don't do sappy poems and this is the first of my kind I've seen on this site. It reminds me of one I just posted I'd like you to check out it's called The One.

[Falling Leaf.]

A punch packed in the ending. Well done.

SG Howe

[Bluefire]

Very dark and I love the twist. Great job!

[CHRIS ANDES]

..I like the ending
=]
thanks

[Dominique]

This is very dark, I belive this is an amazing peice and I am amazed. I love it!

[Ella]

Oh. My. Gosh! You're such an amazing writer! I don't even know what to say! I LOVE this so much! STUNNING! I don't know what else to say, beautifully written, about a subject I love :3

[Rika]

Thank you so much!

[Ella]

You're very welcome :D

[_]

*gaps madly* *coughs madly afterwards after inhaling too much air* Awww, that's soo cool I'm like hmm what is this creature, mhhmmm, something dark, mhhmmmm, mhmmm uhm a warrior the devil??, *read last sentence* OH! not expected! COOL!!!!

[Rika]

Are you okay maybe you should get that checked out XD

[Steven Cash]

This has gotta be the start of an evil superhero movie

[Bumble]

I love the darkness in this poem. Well done! :D

[deepblue04]

wow, I really like how I can't expect the content in your poem.... But... I always liked the comment of it, good job!