Stained black

Wings black as night

Heart cold as snow

He won’t protect you

He’ll only deceive you 

Once a warrior of light

Now a soldier of dark

The most evil creature I know

The one whom I despise

My angel

Reviews

[Butters]

Honestly, I LOVE this!! I don't know what else to say, it's just good. For the most part I don't do sappy poems and this is the first of my kind I've seen on this site. It reminds me of one I just posted I'd like you to check out it's called The One.

[Nigaiyuki]

Wow... Very deep... I like it :3

[Tasha]

I loved this from beginning to end, short but captivating. Wonderful piece.

[Rika]

Thanks again!

[Tasha]

No problem!

[Castonovia]

Short, but sweet with lovely darkness and a twist so unexpcted, love the angel vs. fallen aspect... really beautiful ;)

[Rika]

Thankyou!

[Castonovia]

Anytime ;p

[Felecia]

Offically love this. It's short, but so....beautifully evil and wonderfully amazing. I just can't even explain. Angel's...oh how I adore me. Good and evil, either or....just so....beautifully dangerous.

[Rika]

Thank alot!

[Felecia]

No problem!

[The Invisible Girl]

Short but amazingly good! 100/100

[✖Lust✖]

Just. Love it

[Poison Ivy]

oh wow! this is gorgeous! i love the picture too, went perfectly with the poem!

[Rika]

Thank you!

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

This is so great! It's short and simple and really mysterious.

[Belinda]

I like it! I don't know why! But I do! I think it should be in a book, or be the beginning of a book and then the story start after that! I love it!

[David the writer]

This makes me feel like i'm looking at god, and Satan's war from god's eyes. Not sayin it is, but it just felt like that. It also felt really cool too. Great job!