Bursting Light

Light of my life bursts through bright morning sky
Touching my soul, so desperate to fly
Cottonbud clouds shroud past regrets
Holding thumbs for when we first met

Soft breeze of passion sees love swimming in the air
Hands express pure gentleness running through your hair
Mischevious golden waves of inviting amber rays
Forever on fire, we dance, pulsate and sway

Smouldering skin, sensuous shoulders burn
Heat of the day says we never learn
Eyes move in places never caught in the shade
Love breathes forever in a breeze that never fades

Sometimes sad raindrops explode on the pavement
Watching them land sparkling with wry amusement
Destiny will save us, locked within stares
Flavours explode incandesecent with flair

Fancies and musings of shimmering moonbeams
Together at night in adoring dreams

Reviews

[Celtic Cat]

Man, you've got it bad. Should I send over Dolly for a wee visit? Stephanie, even? Aw, shucks, Gary, the romance is oozing from your fingers now!!!! It's incredibly sickening, I mean, adorable. ; ) Your words lift me up to a fantasy realm....and make me want to linger there all day. Excellent work.

[Blackbirdsong]

You write with such passion for nature and I love how you describe the various elements and what's going on. You really have a gift for this sort of writing.

[T. L. O'Neal]

I enjoyed this piece and the imagery that it conveys. It gives to the reader a sense of passion without overly doing it. It also has a wonderful quality to it as if floating on air. The picture goes with it very well. T

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Beautiful picture mated with beautiful thoughts and expression.

"Eyes move in places never caught in the shade ..."

The whole of the poem features excellent description and a flowing, hypnotic rhythm. A very good write!

[youngwriter222]

another great one! beautiful description, I have that picture in my mind of EVERYTHING you described.


Soft breeze of passion sees love swimming in the air
Hands express pure gentleness running through your hair
Mischevious golden waves of inviting amber rays
Forever on fire, we dance, pulsate and sway

[TL Boehm]

a beautiful almost wistful love poem. Well done.

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

beautifully written... loved this piece... you paint an amzing image with your words... fantastic job...

ooo that picture is fantastic as well... i wish i was there watching that sunrise (or set)...

[Damian Alan Gray]

This is a great piece of work. It reminds me of fleeting summer romances that seem as though they will last forever, yet by December are reduced to fading memories.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

A beautiful poetry bursting forth with True Love. Stunning imagery in your words. Thank you for sharing. A lovely write.
Light,
Siddartha

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

This is one of the most , honestly , the most beautiful poems i have read and i just read 30 poems for a contest about love..
The descriptions you use take me to the place and i can see and feel the sun, raindrops .. what a lovely poem, Gary..

Chloe
xoxo