Bursting Light

Light of my life bursts through bright morning sky
Touching my soul, so desperate to fly
Cottonbud clouds shroud past regrets
Holding thumbs for when we first met

Soft breeze of passion sees love swimming in the air
Hands express pure gentleness running through your hair
Mischevious golden waves of inviting amber rays
Forever on fire, we dance, pulsate and sway

Smouldering skin, sensuous shoulders burn
Heat of the day says we never learn
Eyes move in places never caught in the shade
Love breathes forever in a breeze that never fades

Sometimes sad raindrops explode on the pavement
Watching them land sparkling with wry amusement
Destiny will save us, locked within stares
Flavours explode incandesecent with flair

Fancies and musings of shimmering moonbeams
Together at night in adoring dreams

Reviews

[Celtic Cat]

Man, you've got it bad. Should I send over Dolly for a wee visit? Stephanie, even? Aw, shucks, Gary, the romance is oozing from your fingers now!!!! It's incredibly sickening, I mean, adorable. ; ) Your words lift me up to a fantasy realm....and make me want to linger there all day. Excellent work.

[Dawn]

This is really sweet, i love the way you describe feelings, very important in life. Love can be amazing.
Dawn

[Pj]

As usual...breathtaking! I could feel every word of it...

[free2bee]

I can feel the heat and the passion running through this piece, wonderful work!

Great piece. The form, the words, and the rhythm jives together with the message.

And the message has been imparted well.

A great piece

[Carole]

Breathtaking picture! Is this one a google image? I love it. What a beautiful love story.

Light of my life bursts through bright morning sky
Touching my soul, so desperate to fly
Cottonbud clouds shroud past regrets
Holding thumbs for when we first met

Love the choice of words. They lend to the perfectly tranquility of this write. Well done, my friend.

[D. Elizabeth]

This is a steamy piece! its filled with a fire that's blazing. Love like this never goes out. Really loved every stanza of this piece, it built up nicely...xo -D.E.

[Natasha Ashway]

Lovely...+++***

[Red Raven]

I feel whole when i read this poem.
I connect the nature display with the flow of human emotion
and the daily relationship which sometimes have a touch of blues lingering.
I like the subtle flow and the controlled tone in it.
Love my dear friend.
Keep writing.

[James K. Blaylock]

This is truly beautiful, man! I loved the feel and flow wholly.

jkb

[~Wandering Soul~]

this is so beautiful it is amazing the emotions bursting from ti are amazing
great work