Forever summer

Forever summer

A Poem by Gee
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13/08/21...Our dear friend Deb passed, the most bright and beautiful lady...forever summer in our hearts.

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She left whilst pastel colours reigned
before autumn made it's bow,
to rest in peace beyond this world
in the heavens an angel now.
And with her went the summer sun
blue skies turned grey as lead,
a silence came upon the birds
each flower bowed its head,
a gentle breeze it stirred the air
and sorrowfully said
"still every hand on every clock
for she's gone, she's gone, she's dead..."











© 2022 Gee


Author's Note

Gee
I will add to this, just wanted to post something as sitting here thinking of Deb

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What a soft, beautiful, well written, Gem this is. Blown away, what a talented writer you are. Thank you for this poem, and for our little chat the other night. Thank you!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind words and the chat was appreciated this end too:)
Hi there Gee,
Back to review this sweet poem again... Decided to read it because it is now summer...
Lisa, out of the salt water pool and ready to watch TV...

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Thank you Lisa
Lisasview

1 Year Ago

You are again very welcome...
Lisa
hey, no storm..
The image of the clocks hands in its typical cadence saying the last line. So effective. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Thanks Frederick
Beautifully written and beyond affecting.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Gee

2 Years Ago

Thanks Travis, Deb is so missed.
Nature pays tribute to the dearly departed. I enjoyed reading this and how nature paid homage to your friend. Wonderfully done!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Gee

2 Years Ago

Thank you. Glad to enjoyed
Your imagery paints a sky sped up in sadness. Blue turns black and the sun hides its smile.

"before autumn made it's bow"

A sad but well written piece Gee. I hope you're well.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Gee

2 Years Ago

Best natural high Duff, laughter with loved ones and friends :))
Hope you are keeping well
duff

2 Years Ago

I agree with that. I am well and I appreciate our banter.
Gee

2 Years Ago

As I do :)
This is beautiful both in its message and the way it is written. By far my favorite of your poems I have read so far. It captures grief so well and the feeling of something beautiful being lost.

cricket 🦗

Posted 2 Years Ago


Gee

2 Years Ago

Thank you :)
though sad, your poem is beautifully written.
cheerio carola

Posted 2 Years Ago


Gee

2 Years Ago

Thank you Carola.
I love the way you leave, always has me smiling
I came on here to get my own back, but after reading this I'm too choked to write. Beautiful!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Gee

2 Years Ago

Cheers Bryan, Deb was the life and soul of life itself, a close friend for nigh on 45 years and the .. read more
Bryan Sefton

2 Years Ago

My wife was knocked by a car and really smashed up. That night I realised how empty life would be wi.. read more
Gee

2 Years Ago

I will have a read when back from the gym. Sorry to hear about your wife

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Added on December 25, 2021
Last Updated on April 15, 2022
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