Sun Lilly's

Sun Lilly's

A Poem by Holly Mason

Here is where the light fairy's play
coming with a soft song to lay
sun lilly by the flowing stream
fairy light with her body beam
rays of peaceful ribbon light
wrapping the stars with delight
fluttering wings of paradise
sun lilly fairy's shine on tonight
she whispers a dust of fairy breath
so long sun lilly for fairy death
and with no light for fairy's shine
no sun lilly could be divine

© 2013 Holly Mason


Author's Note

Holly Mason
sorry about proper punctuation etc. this just felt right

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I think it's wonderful. Your imagery is beautiful. I wanted to find my own sun lily. ; )

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a fandabby write Holly! I loved it and the imagery was amazing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Holly Mason

10 Years Ago

thank you little princess*)
it read very well and i enjoyed the images very much Holly...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

Thank you Miss Stella...Lilly is a little girl that I did a lot for I had to move and I worry greatl.. read more
it felt very write, should be said/read in one breath. a wonderfully creative piece

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

like the felt very write, much!
thank you for reading all in one breath...like that also*)
xxlheart

11 Years Ago

had to make you smile somehow ~L~ my eyes are exhausted but lungs are good :)
I love your note, 'this just felt right', it shows the true meaning of poetry, and how you can write from your heart and end up with a beautiful poem! Well done :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Your work is like an egyptian silk it smooth and indulging when you started reading it untill the end of the story. Good work Holly.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

Thank you kind sir
been there done that its got flow sounds good.
nice work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Awesome... such pretty images conjured here.

This poem is full of beautiful imagery and child-like in freshness and innocence. The Sun Lilly Fairy would appeal to all age groups! Very magical too !

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

I tend to write a little different I am having writing fun with word smiles all around...this is my .. read more
Ayvid N

11 Years Ago

The ease and flair with which it is written comes through...as does the fact that you must have enjo.. read more
Your words here are breathtaking it took me to that magical place you so beautifully created. Very beautiful and this is going into my favorites:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

thank you for your kind words
Androglossia

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome!
This is magical. Beautiful write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

thank you so kindly

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Holly Mason
Holly Mason

Rockledge, FL



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