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Compartment 114
Jacks cold nose(winter)

Jacks cold nose(winter)

A Poem by Gee
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A winter morning

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Now all is touched by Jacks cold nose,
dusted white the neat hedgerows,
where spiders webs hang iced in place,
like doilies spun from finest lace.

Whilst trees arthritic, stark and bare
reach for a warmth no longer there,
from a fading sun in wintery skies,
as the last of Autumn falls and dies.














© 2022 Gee


Author's Note

Gee
Stating the obvious but Jack is Jack Frost

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I found a smile rising loudly upon my face, such a beautiful poem. And I mean brilliant. Some people surprise you, I am learning, what I mean is I may read and really like the writing and recognize that writer, like the tone in someones voice, there's always that sound there somewhere. People rarely change that much. You know they are wonderful. I can tell you are a force to be recognized. Wow. Thank you. Just beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Gee

9 Years Ago

You are very kind.Thanks for a wonderful review
Confuser

9 Years Ago

Thank you, just being honest.

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Added on December 28, 2014
Last Updated on March 30, 2022
Tags: ice, spiders, web, winter, sun

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Gee
Gee

Milton keynes, United Kingdom



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