Spiritual Autopsy

Spiritual Autopsy

A Poem by Rob Santana
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G.O.O.D. V.S. E.V.I.L. (acrostic write #1) possible lyrics

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Gathering  together  the  chosen  ones

Organizing  the  two  faced  holy  nuns

Oracles  regurgitating  obscene  incantations

Death  with  it's  final  cancellation

 

Venomous  words  invade  my  subconscious

Salvation, worship, obey or die

 

Erupting  with  dire  aggression eyes  filled  with  fire

Violent  images  received  through  voodoo  voyages

Insane  idolaters  performing  a  spiritual  autopsy

Lucifer  pens  my  obituary….”He was spiritually weak”

 

© 2017 Rob Santana


Author's Note

Rob Santana
Good vs Evil, me against both...

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you against both...this is a really good piece, R, I loved the ending line...spiritually weak, wow. Great write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rob Santana

7 Years Ago

thank you, thank you....haha
Ghost of Jupiter

7 Years Ago

are you taking a bow too? lol
Rob Santana

7 Years Ago

YES I WAS, HAHA
This is a very interesting write, with a nice little "twist" at the end.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rob Santana

7 Years Ago

It's some weird s**t to me ,hahaha.
Wow I like this one brother.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rob Santana

7 Years Ago

This one is my favourite.
Ooooh, I can feel the darkness. I imagined each line read, one by one, punctuated with a bell ringing before each line was read. Each line a statement standing on it's own merits, neatly tied together as good vs. evil. Loved it man. It seems you've heard Lucifer write an obit before.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rob Santana

7 Years Ago

Killer visuals you've given me through your review. I imagine it the same way, powerful and passiona.. read more
clever...nice work, this evil versus good tends to be flourishing these days...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rob Santana

7 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by Art.
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Dye
Neither sound like a side to be on. Your last line was killer!!!

"Lucifer pens my obituary...."He was spiritually weak"

That was great! Awesome in fact.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rob Santana

7 Years Ago

Muchas gracias Dye........
Dye

7 Years Ago

de nada Rob
Creeper! I liked this, very well done Acrostic poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rob Santana

7 Years Ago

Hey! H.M. how are you!!!!!! Long time no see!!!! Thanks for visiting ')
Clever work! I really enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing!

-CW

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rob Santana

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the visit Cody...
Cody Williams

7 Years Ago

No problem!
CREEPER, this is outstanding in its scathing, profound venomous darkness
Dripping from your pen. Love the whole concept of this, Spiritual Autopsy,
100 - 100 :)









Posted 7 Years Ago


Rob Santana

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much!!!
The title is a lead in to what becomes an analysis of one's spiritual journey in life........your descriptive phrases leave no doubt as to the final verdict! And a "beyond the grave" acrostic as well!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rob Santana

7 Years Ago

Thank you much Sheila:)

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